Awww, cute! I love Toothless!

A enjoyable fan fiction. You wrote a decent amount,had a good description on what happened, and had toothless act like his actual character in the movie. Overall, I give it a 9/10

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I loved it you should make a how to train your dragon story when toothless does get grass in his scalls and the other dragons go crazy! I just love this story! :)(:

P.S. HAPPY NEW YEAR!

P.S. I see you like south park most of your storys of south park. Ive never seen south park of no what its about I think its a hunrer movie but im pready shere im wrong.

Amazing. I love how you expressed the emotions of Hiccup and Toothless and how you described the scene :3

awww this was a cute little one-shot Toothless sounds so adorable in this story! and u like never hear me say adorable, so that it pretty big...anyways awesome story i love it!

cuuuteeeee:)

Cute! Somehow, all the fanfare speak at the beginning made the ending all the more delightful. It was a very poetic and visual little piece, and your writing is beautiful! You really captured the subtle sarcasm of Hiccup and fluffed it up with some high-stakes syntax. It was a charming effect.