oh my god, I've already read this 4 times and I keep thinking that she has to help her back, they're not even - I'm speaking on everyones behalf, you have to do this because it sounds like a dream come true, a fantasy unveiled, and you could be it's pioneer, guiding the lonely souls into the wicked, consuming erotica

cheers

thank goodness no one found them! it upsets when me when people interrupt two character's private time and I loved the way you did this!

Why haven't more people reviewed this? This is freaking fabulous! Luna pocketing Hermione's undies was the cherry on top of a deliciously lemony cake! :P Great job! Thanks for writing! :)

That was excellent D I really appreciate your use of language. Not everyone here can express events clearly. I love how you developed Hermione's feelings as the situation unfolded.

If you're looking for more Hermione/Luna slash you mat want to check out the story I just finished a little while ago.

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Oh my god] never thought Luna as a pantie thief ;]

Hermione! When someone eats you out it's only polite to offer to return the favour.

Sexy story though, I love how open and excepting Luna always is.

I so want a sequel! It was freaking hilarious (in a good way). Poor Hermione, missing her undergarments. XD Sequel. Please. I want to see what happens when they see each other afterwards.

This was rather quite nice. That last part was too funny. Luna makes me lol.

isn't Luna a Griffindor? no offense meant, just curious

Ahaha i love the end :)! Great Story

Sooooo this was Luna genius evil plan to steal Hermione's panties! jajaja i loooved this i always loved hermione luna couple they are so opposite but at the same time such a nice combination both smart and brave, and they complete and help each other! so why in the world the book had to end in hermione ron they are not a good couple they fight to much and they simply do not go well together! HG/LL forever

I absolutely love that Luna pocketed the panties simply brilliant!

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Amazing! Really good work and the imagery was fantastic. Bravo.

Why does this not have more reviews? D; Possibly the hottest Hermione/Luna I've ever read. Excellent work. ;)