Seriously, you nailed the Gai and Shibi argument in the car. I loved that so much! XD It was without a doubt my most favourite part of this chapter!

I have to admit, when I realized that it was Hidan who was chasing Shino I got really freaking scared! I couldn't even try and imagine what would happen next! But I must admit to be super happy that we finally know who the psycho murderers are now. But how in Spongebob's hell are our two favourite protagonists going to get out of there?!

I really wished you continued this story because it is unbelievably amazing! But a shame that it has been years since you last updated :(

Here's to hoping you would one day return. And for what it's worth, this story has inspired me one hell of a lot.

~Poodie

It the psychos make their appearence in the next chapter I would be more than happy XD Poor Shino in truth. Tenten just has no idea the kind of lethal effect she has on him.

Heres to hoping that I am over whelmed in the next chapter with complete happiness!

~Poodie

I remember a lady I had met once said that she didnt know how rice had worked, and she thought that you needed to pour in the amount of rice that you wanted to have in the pot and it'll just soften...it ended in a catastrophe XD

This was adorably funny! I kept hoping in the back of my mind that they would go back playing house again XD

I just adore the fact that you included what was going with Gai as he waited. I love it! Now I can't wait for Tenten amd Shino to have an awkward playdate of "house" XD I laughed quite a bit when she suggested it XD

My favourite part of this chapter would definitely have to be where it was centered around Shibi. I've always been a sucker for side characters and their appreciation dedications that almost never seem to happen. This was great and I can't wait to see what all the fuss is supposed to be about XD

~Poodie

I love how Tenten was all like "I'll feel up your chest". XD She amuses me to no end. Nw that I think about it, what will they do to exit?!

~Poodie

I think I'm in love with this chapter XD So much happened and those last few scenes were both intoxicating and hilarious. Tenten is such a klutz XD

I absolutely adore this chapter and all interaction that went with it! I also love how you make Shino wish bad on Neji, but that's not always what he thinks of XD

Hmmmmm... I'm seriously curious as to what this whole thing is that's going on with Tsunade and I can't wait to find out! :3

~Poodie

Okay now that ending has me hella curious XD I can't wait to see who or what it is XD Also if they are sending Jiraiya to keep an eye on Tsunade if you know what I mean XD

Poor Tenny and Shino. But at least it makes for a great plot :D

~Poodie

I love chemistry class chaos! At least in stories XD This was fun and I enjoyed it!

~Poodie

I laughed really hard when Gai was talking about how Chiyo doesn't like him and was most probably the person who tried to kill him that one time XD That was hilarious!

~Poodie

Things are already getting in place! I am really enjoying this so far :3 I've definitely been recently converted to a ShinoTen fanatic by Rel. XD

~Poodie

update soon. please

this is one of the most awesome stories i have ever read.
can't wait for more chapters.
kinda feelin sad for poor shino-tenten please don't set him up with other girls. :,(

this is bloody brilliant.
can't wait for the next chapter.

TAT I really want to know what happens next...
(I also realize that you haven't updated this in years, but I can dream, can't I?)