Jeez. Damn that broke my heart. And now I’m crying great. Awesome writing though.

That was terribly sad but so well written. I'm still sobbing. You a talented writer. Thanks.

Well...excuse me while I go curl up in a ball somewhere. This was such a heartbreaking, but amazing story. You captured the raw emotions of the characters so well. I'm looking forward to any other stories you write.

Oh my goodness this so so sad!

great story.. but too sad.. I would have rather seen them happy and old Edward get the boot!

Ouch! I sure didn't expect Jacob to die! Good story, but definitely sad!

OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO SAD! I am crying so much right now! :( :( :( :(

omg you made me cry thats so sad. Why did they have to die? Sniff.. Sniff. Good story though.

Wow. Just. . . wow. This story was beautifully well written. I passed this story and first, the name caught my attention. I saw that the story was JxB (and I usually hate those, ExB forever!), but I gave it a chance and I loved it! I was almost crying at the end, the reason I didn't cry is because my bro was next to me and I don't want him thinking I'm a lunatic or something. I love how Billy finishes the story because of what happened. . . oh great. I'm crying again. LOVE THE STORY! ,-)

cool story

I didn't see that ending coming! Very tragic. You are an excellent writer. Personally, I would have preferred a happy ending, but I read through the story quickly. It definitely had me interested. Poor Charlie! Poor Jacob! Poor Bella! I can even feel sorry for Edward.

Wow! That was both amazing and saddening. I hated that Bella was a vampire but loved when she gave Edward his walking papers. I knew it was going wrong at the bite but I was too far in to look away.

Just wow! Not my usual read but I love your writing so I couldn't help it and glad I did.

I actually love this. Seriously. Not the "OMG I love this" sorta of love, but "I will love this for years" sorta love.

It's very touching, and I completely didn't expect the ending.

I finally had time to read this and I'm glad I did!

Your a really great writer :) The way you write grapped hold off my attention from start to finish.

I love it, it's such a sweet and tragic story. Once again, I loved it and I'm glad it's in the imprint community!

Bex

Nice one-shot! Good work with the plotline and the writing is very good. You have talent and I hope to see more stories form you!

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