Reviews for Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
PearlyFox chapter 49 . 10/13/2019
Thanks so much for your words. This was truly an amazing story 3
PearlyFox chapter 7 . 10/1/2019
Oh poor Edward.
PearlyFox chapter 5 . 10/1/2019
*SHOWING LOVE*
PearlyFox chapter 4 . 10/1/2019
I’m hooked!
BeautifullyScripted chapter 45 . 6/17/2019
Nevermind, hahahahaha!
BeautifullyScripted chapter 44 . 6/17/2019
I feel like he forgave her too quickly. like... telling someone you used them, dont love them and breaking up is very extreme. I feel lile he shouldve thought things over and if they end up together then great but there should be a moment of reflection or something.
saintfudge chapter 49 . 5/3/2019
Wow great story ...I have had this in my favs /alerts since Feb 2012 ...finally got around to reading it ...loved it ..the length of the story always put ime off reading it ..as I like a quick read - so glad I read it thank you thank you for sharing ..have fun
Krista Marie chapter 49 . 3/18/2019
I absolutely loved this story ! The character development , the plot , I was surprised a lot! Good job really . I am so very impressed with this amazing story !
Guest chapter 49 . 10/22/2018
A 3 figure income is $101-999. Literally. Do you mean six figure? $100,000 or more?

The end came out of nowhere and we didn’t see either character fix themselves.
Guest chapter 39 . 10/20/2018
Didn’t you state in an early chapter that Edward would receive his trust fund at 25 or 26?

Also, it’s an island, not an islander.
Guest chapter 33 . 10/20/2018
Kapeesh Capisce. It’s Italian.

And Cassanova was a person, not Casa Nova.
Guest chapter 32 . 10/18/2018
I Want 2 Spend Christmas With The Cullen's & Spoil Those Adorable Twin Boys lol
Guest chapter 12 . 10/18/2018
FWIW, Calvary is where Jesus was crucified. The Cavalry is men on horseback.
Bevey99 chapter 49 . 9/5/2017
Well done.
Bevey99 chapter 48 . 9/5/2017
It's just good enough. I thinking that a major word was missing. Maybe he was going to say It's just NOT good enough.
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