That is so incredibly sweet..love the line about them being just pepper and Tony

OHMYGAWD. That's beautiful. Love you(:

HAAAAAHHHAHAAHHAHA! Fluff makes me crack up:))))))

so cute!

Oh. My. Gosh. That was incredible. How do you do it? :D If you weren't already on my Favorite Authors list I would be faving you a million times over! Fantastic story! I loved everything about it- you always have unique ways of getting them together, and I love it! Btw, your Tony and Pepper characterizations are exactly how I imagine them in my head, so props to you! (: And when he sang to her...complete "awwww" moment for me. ;D Really enjoyed this, great job! (And I need to listen to these songs, lol!) Write again, please!

-Person

Very,very cute. Deffinetely enjoyed it :) AnnaTW

AWW! This was SSOOOO sweet! :)::):)

I've read this story through, it was sweet. The general idea is pretty great. I just wanted to suggest that you make things less explicit. What I mean by that is that everything is explained through and through for the reader and everything seems a bit too intense. The way Tony talks, while in character, is a bit over the top around the edges - "Cut the Mr. Stark" is perfect, whereas " It's been a week and you're still moping around like you lost the love of your life" is a bit off, cause Tony is not bff material.

Mostly it felt like revealing too much of their feelings and thoughts in a way that leaves me no place to feel things on my own. I hope you get what I'm trying to say here.. :)

The last thing is that the little comment about the sex life was uncalled for. I think Tony is grown so serious about Pepper he wouldn't allow this to slip. On the other hand, if you insist it's in character for Tony, it's a little petty to make Pepper angry for it, a bit disrupting to the flow of the story I think.

Anyway, good luck with your writing. I'm pretty enjoying reading "You're all I want". :)