So cute! D The whole story is great, and I love how you made it slightly more unique by making her premature. Great job!

You NEED to keep writing. I don't care what about. Honey, this story had me in tears and laughing through everything. You have a strong talent, don't waste it. 3 You're so amazing.

congrats on this story. i enjoyed it :D

Thank you for sharing this story. Sweet and with not too much angst and drama - I enjoyed it a lot. And of course, imagining daddy Artie makes me feel all warm and fuzzy :-)

This was my first official ff that I have ever read, and I am just amazed!

Your an amazing writer and you make me love Tartie even more (and I didn't even know that was humanly possible)!

aaaawww cute! two ideas for you if you are interested:

1. make a one shot sequel to this showing the proposal...cause seriously how adorable would that be?

2. write another story of them growing up with Gracie...and maybe make it in Artie's point of view

No pressure here but you are a really good writer and i thought of these ideas so if you want to combine the two and give one of them a whirl that would be awesome

good ending

Oh my god perfect ending! so cute! i'm sad this story is over, one of my favorites i have ever read!

You have to make a sequel to this!

OMFG B. I CAN'T. *Squeals*

OMG AWWWWWWW! so adorable! Sorry lol I love this story it's so good and the ending was amazing! So sad it's over but it really was great :)

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awww artie/gracie bonding!

Oh my gosh I have tears running down my cheeks! That was soooooooooo sweet! I can't wait for the epilogue, this story really is great!

this is good