Reviews for Alphabet Soup II
loula chapter 8 . 10/10/2016
I really loved this,you did an excellent work!
Thanl you so much for writing about them!
Relena Duo chapter 8 . 6/26/2014
BEAUTIFUL!
MorganL chapter 8 . 9/5/2010
Hi...I remember reading your stuff on LJ fic comms, do you still post over there? Anyway, just wanted to let you know I LOVE this fic. It is such a brilliant look at Jack and Kate's afterlife, and your writing is just fantastic. Looking forward to reading more from you in the future.
Nille815 chapter 8 . 8/14/2010
Great update... but no is this really the last chapter? :( I loved this - especially "youth" and "wedding" and "X" made me laugh :)
NYR88 chapter 8 . 8/13/2010
Wow great story. Hate to see it end. Hope you will continue to write Jate.
Philadelphia chapter 8 . 8/13/2010
It's sad that it's over. I like this story and I will miss it!
strdstbttrfly chapter 8 . 8/12/2010
Wonderful Story. Loved it! The X-Men part was hilarious and the wedding was perfect. But Zoom was perfect. Made me want to cry. Long live Jate.
Jimelda chapter 8 . 8/12/2010
Oh my god. I am honestly speechless at how perfect this last chapter was. Every part of the afterlife that you described almsot made me cry. I'm so glad they all get to be happy now. I really enjoyed the one about their wedding, and the Young one too - it's so true. But Charlie, Hurley and Miles debating whether or not the survivors of flight 815 were better than the X-Men was too hilarious.

You are SUCH an amazing writer and I hope you do more fics like this soon, it was such a joy to read. :)
Jimelda chapter 7 . 8/11/2010
I really love your descriptions of the afterlife, how everyone gets to see each other all the time and they live in houses. It's just too cute. Of course, Kate running in to Jacob was pretty awesome too. "It was a lifetime of hell in exchange for an eternity in heaven." Wow.

So James and Juliet are finally engaged, huh? The ring she wore on her finger made me smile so much too. And Jack's proposal to Kate was equally sweet.

Yay! I'm glad we get to see Aaron too, the way he greeted Jack without any anger was wonderful.

Hahaha, the part about Jack's Bronco was cute. I love this fic and all your drabbles, and I can't wait for the last chapter! :)
Franci chapter 7 . 8/10/2010
MUAHAHH the last sentence *eyebrows*

loved them babe! i don't want it to enddd!

keep writing yes? yes. :)
Philadelphia chapter 7 . 8/10/2010
I love it!
hersheygal chapter 6 . 8/1/2010
This story makes me so happy. You are such a great writer.
hersheygal chapter 6 . 8/1/2010
This story makes me so happy. You are such a great writer.
goodbeans chapter 6 . 8/1/2010
each scene, if you will, captures their dynamics so perfectly.
Philadelphia chapter 6 . 8/1/2010
Simply love it!
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