Brilliant!~~

ñan! :D 3

I really think this story should be ranked higher, it's up with the best!

nice good work
keep on writing:)

Oh wow, you should write more, this was REALLY good! :D

I really really really really (x4) love it (: :D

That's so sweet. I loved it.

very cute, with a twist of creepy. it's the first Wallflower oneshot i've ever read, but if they'll all like yours i'm sure i be able to read them all!

awesome work! i hope you'll write more!

Aaaaaaaawwwwwww that was sweat.:)

Kyaaaa!XD

So utterly cute!loved it!

I really like this one! While it is slightly inconsistant to the original story's tone, I like the way it's written. If The Wallflower, or YNSH as others prefer to call it, had been written as a hardcore romantic drama, this would be a fitting end. and I, along with countless other fan girls, would have swooned at the part where he kisses her goodnight. *sigh* its incredibly romantic.

Now, because I can't really express my reaction any other way, I will have to quote the goth loli sisters in saying this:

Swoon Ne~!

Awwww So Sweet! I love it and hope that it happens sometime SOON!

oh my god! i really loved it! wat happens after that?

It was so sweet! :']

But you can use quotations(") better than just apostrophe(') for dialogs. See majority of fanfics here? Apostrophe can be for thoughts.

Also I want to spread this word, there is a group called Literate Union that reports fanfics with smut/ma/graphic/poor grammars etc. So be sure to have your fics backed-up. There were already several fics that got taken down so I'm reading as much fanfics as I used to before then review them like what I did here.

I do not think that this fic will be reported though, since only slight mistake in grammar so rest assured. I really dislike their mentality and methods of cleaning FFnet society.

So please when you read fanfics, review too and notice their mistakes and give them advices that you can. Note that they should back-up their stories too. And tell them to spread my word about Literate Union too. You can see their site at:

literateunion . blogspot . com (without the spaces)

Back to my review: I Love this, really! SunakoxKyouhei ftw. I just finished the japanese drama yesterday XD soo cute!

This was sooo cute :D

I'm definitely adding this to my favorites !

xxxJasmine