Oh, lord. XD;

Interesting premise (...what's Kyle gonna do to Stan on the way? 8DDD), and...so full...of...sex? Lots of sexual tension running amok here, I see. It's sort of disturbing to find Ike fucking Bebe (mostly because I've never seen this pairing before, but she's so often seen as a whore that...well, something like this was /bound/ to happen anyway P:). Ike's helluva funny, by the way. Preceptive little bastard indeed. XD Kyle seems a little too sex-driven, though...but, maybe that has something to do with the future plot, so I'll just shut up about it right now and wait for the next chapter. x3;;

- Beth.

I read your story, Im not a South Park fan but you're a good writer, my prdeiction is he's gonna have sex with Bebe

Whoa.. Ike is a pimp.. :U

xD nice~! i like it and im curious for whats next

Your style is very similar to Trey and Matt, random-wise, which makes me love this even more. :) I'm looking forward to more chapters, most definitely. :D I love how you played off of 'Bebe's Boobs Destroy Society'. Very clever. (:

Bye for now~!

~Terr

That was quite the story. :) Your detail is immaculate and your grammar is impeccable. I'm not a huge fan of slash, but I enjoyed that. :D You did the television show justice, unlike many authors of this fandom.

Looking forward to more~! (:

-Terr.

You spelled 'definitely' wrong in your summary, dear.

Just for future reference. XD

Style is love. So much love. I haven't checked the fandom in ages, but this is the first well written Style I've read in that time.

[[Stan could crush boulders with his bare hands and hearts with his uncensored words.]]

I loved this line. It was really, really beautiful and poetic.

This story makes me smile. Awww its cute~! 3

I like Kyle's friendliness crush and lust for Stan *squeals*

Your Ike AWESOME. Dude, I laughed my ass off, he's pretty mature for his age, huh? And a hippie black pony tail? Hilarious. I hope you continue this! :D

Pretty good. Well written, I hope you continue this, I would love to see more from you .

Hi thar! That was interesting. Hope you continue! D

Your grammar is great btw. Found no mistakes.

The last part was just... WOW ! I enjoyed this first chapter and hope the next one is on it's way soon. KEEP IT GOING ! UPDATE SOON ! Best of Wishes !

Signed- Traban16