This was nice; I really liked it. Probably one of the best Spyro-leaves-Cynder fanfics I've read. The ending was alright, but I was left a bit disappointed with it and wanting more. I feel like you got lazy at the end and just wanted Spyro back. This raises so many questions. If Spyro has been alive for so long, why DIDN'T he return to Cynder? Surely being away from Cynder, the one he loves would have really hurt him, so why would he willingly stay away from her? For FOUR YEARS too. Plus, she's been in a world of hurt, surely if Spyro loved her he wouldn't leave her alone for that long. Secondly, now that he's here, what actually happened to him all that time ago when the guardians first found the bloodied and broken armour? You've ended the story with more questions than we have answers. You referenced them, especially when Cynder asked Spyro about it but he refused to tell her, and then avoided the topic all together. It seemed you were too lazy to properly think of a reason for Spyro's return and for why he was away for so long, and it really brought my hopes down. This was a great story and I was expecting an amazing ending and well, I was a little disappointed.

I understand this was finished in 2010 and the chances of you returning to expand anything is like the chance of a pig sprouting wings and then breathing fire, but if you do see this, I hope you consider it; it'll help the story out a lot if you explained this properly. I really enjoyed the first three chapters at least, so nice job.

NNNNOOOOO WHY COULDN'T YOU CONTINUE

that was great but I'm tired and I'm late to comment by over a year so...

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SHADO WAS SPYRO

DID YOU HAVE TO PUT IN A NEW DRAGON AT THE END SPYRO BETTER COME BACK

Great story love the plot maybe a bit cleche but i guess i love this kind of story. You are doing a great job. This is my first ever review so i dobt have an accound but just call me jmZ. Yea that name works well on this site. All in all great direction and if you want any help with plot creation i could just shout out a few directions. Love how your centering on cynder and i do hope that this doesnt become a lemon. The angst is fine maybe when they meet just fluff it but not too much but alao not too little. I believe you can do the perfect job on some stories. Keep up the great work.!

BEST FANFIC EVEEEEEEEEER!

That was the best story I've read in so long.

Congrats you are the first one to bring tears to my eyes in a long time.

Well I'm excited to see what happens.

when I first read this story, I was like holy freaking slike that just got serious...

pls right more

Well damn. That took a 180 turn in all of five seconds xD

Typo: thee instead of there.
Nice ending, though I kinda saw it coming, to be honest... and I'm pretty much guessing that all the ambiguity will be explained in your other stories. Good luck!

That was pretty sweet and sad... I kinda wish there was a bit more description as to the aftermath, but given this is a short story I suppose that's okay.
There were a couple of typos, one at the end was "buy" instead of "by". Also, alot of questions at the end didn't have question marks. And was the alternate spelling of Malefor deliberate?