I absolutely love your Flight of the Conchords story. I am a massive fan of the show and I think your story would be a great episode. I don't think they're making the show anymore, but If they were you could definitely pitch this episode idea.

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It's good to see a Flight of the Conchords fanfic. :) Your portrayal of Murray was spot-on. Write more! :D

Remarkably just like a part of an episode. It had me giggling all the way through. xD All of the dialogue is realistic, and the circumstance too. Fantastic, in a simplistic way. :D

oh, wow. This made me giggle a lot, poor Bret! xD The dialog was perfect, it read just like an episode of the show. Great work, definitely faving it!