great story! sounds like it could be in one of the books,plus hilarious!

It was really good for someone who's never written HP before. I always thought Victoria's Secret was an American store, though? Do they have it in England? Your ending was great, you managed to get the characters really well. Shot. : D

my sisters favorite story

haha the end is just classic Hermione.. well done

I loved this. Such a simple concept created hilarious results. I actually laughed out loud. Ron is such a dork. xD And the ending was sweet. Keep it up! I want more! :P

I can totally imagine this happening: I can hear Ron and Hermione's voices in my head as I read. You really captured the characters and expanded the story beautifully.

Well done, perfect fanfiction :)

This was really funny. I could totally see the characters, they were themselves. You made me laugh and this don't happen often when I'm reading ;).

Good one. I was cracking up reading this.

Lovely!

I dislike very much the Ron/Hermione pairing and I am very cetic about fics involving them together, but... I was so glad to try you story, it's so nicely done!

LOL I loved it!

*Adding to Favorites*

That was... Kinda odd. xD. I mean, it was hilarious how Ron was such an IDIOT about it, but then again, he HAS always been a dense one, ne? xD.

I think that the... um... scene was a little... freakish, for me. xD. I'm only 14, a friend directed me to read this. xD. She's WAY older than I am, so... yeah. She said it was funny, not that it included some seduction on Hermione's behalf (which REALLY sounds kinda weird... Hermione isn't the type of girl to do that. xD).

Though I gotta say - LOVE how she started re-reading Hogwarts, A History, for probably the MILLIONTH time, instead of... doing anything with him, and Ron actually is surprised at that. xD. This was... cute. xD. I'll say that. Not sure how else to put it. P.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWE KAWAIIIIII!XDDDDDDDD

RON AND HERMIONY ARE SO CUTE!

xD I love this. So much. The ending especially. "You're choosing Hogwarts, a History over me?" xD Of course she is, silly Ronald! It's Hermione we're talking about here!

nice story

Ron would ruin the moment...

Victoria's secret is one of my favorite stores...

i love there PINK LINE...

u should do one with them actually going to the store...

that would be funny...

Heey ! (:

- I just wanted to say that i was looking for a new story to read & i LOVE yours, its so cool (: *Keep writing & i'll keep reading ! (: