Oh my gosh at first it hought karin was going to die at chapter 9 and I cried it really didn't help when it says that at chapter 10 toshiro was looking at a grave I was sooooo glad when it said she was healthy good job keep up the good work okay I don't review on every fanfic and rarely do unless it is an absolutly good story

A great story. I loved the cliff hanger at the end. U ha me going there thinking Marin was the one who died

For moments I thought tha Karin had died. I was almost crying.
By the way, I love it and I hope you continues to write HitsuKarin's fic like this.

Just so you know your beta didn't do as good of a job as you think, i found countless grammatical and spelling errors throughout the story, and times were i spend 5 minutes trying to make sense of what was written before me before moving on, still unsure. For example you kept writing Heir as Hair.

Sorry if that was a bit mean It's rather late and i havent sleep, besides those issues it was a rather good story and all in all i enjoyed reading it very much and would very much enjoy reading a Sequal. Though I admit i did NOT like how we were lead to believe Karin had died that night, that was very uncool and i was relived to see she was okay. Thanks for the good read

Kisa Stardust

I don't know why but i was hopping that karin would do something sex like wink or even make a sexy smile when she turned around and toshiro said that he wasn't "disappointed"..but very nice i loved the chapter can't wait to read the next...

awesome

esta genial tu fic me encanto al ser sincera pensé que podría estar aburrido pero mientras fui leyendo la verdad estuvo muy interesante y después en el ultimo capitulo pensé que realmente karin murió y yo noooo T.T pero que bueno que no fue asi, muy buen fic me encanto, ne gusta como escribes y suerte en tus fics :D

AAAAAAAA-MAZING! Just like I remembered! It was like the all time amazing story. I noticed like you mensioned that some of the charactes personalitys and what not changed a little but it works really well. you did a great job writing this fanfic.

Awwww chapter 7 is soo cute!

I remember this story from ages ago when i read it. I loved it so much and i am so happy I found it again. I am about to re read it

It was an amazing story! Don't be downed by people who say the bad grammar overshadows the plot,because it doesn't.

Just be careful to do the spelling and grammar checks next time :)

the story was definitely something is was so interested to read about...

anyway this is truly a suspense, especially in the 10th chapter. I thought that the grave toshiro was in front of was karin's (it almost gave me a heart attack) hahah

anyway..your story is amazing! i look forward to your other stories!

there are some gramatical errors...but the plot makes up for it

The bad grammar overshadows anything positive about the plot. You need to find someone who is actually fluent in English to fix this story for you.

I was pulled in by the summary, nice story.

Man, you scared me a while!

This was soo good! Write more PLEASE! :D More stories :3