omg- I loved the premise and I needed it to last longer! 2 days was too short- she could have been fooled for weeks and slowly fallen for him. Loved it!

It is really rushed, but you decided for the spell to only last 2 days. You should do one, where it lasts a month or so :p

This is awesome, I love it xD

Great Main Idea ! :) Just needed to be longer with more passion in the ending , but I still enjoyed it :)

I love your stories. They are creative and well done for the most part. The only part that I really find lacking is the endings. I beleive you have the potential to make good endings as the rest of the story is good so it it makes me quite sad lol. It's like drinking a soda without fizz, just not as satisfying you know? Add some more fizz into your endings )

really enjoyed this actually laughed out loud at a few bits x

Loved the story!

will there be chapter 6?

i love it plzzz update soon!

that was good keep it up and it was funny

cool

wow, that was really good! I just LUV all of ur fanfics!

lmao very nice great job

mel

Yea I suppose the ending could have gone better but overall I really liked it. It was a really nice story. Good job! :)

Great chapter