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Guest chapter 20 . 7/23/2019 Really dislike Ranma ending up with Akane after the parents' machinations and how she has treated him. It feels too much like all his agency was taken away from him |
Guest chapter 20 . 7/23/2019 Disappointing ending, after all that Ranma has been subjected to, he should have moved on. |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/23/2019 The ladle can totally lock him in his normal form, you are wrong about that, whether naturally, or with the water from the spring of drowned boy. |
Guest chapter 18 . 7/23/2019 All three sisters act like cruel or bigoted bitches, he should just move on and find happiness elsewhere, none of them are good for him. |
Guest chapter 16 . 7/23/2019 Since they have the Pail of Preservation, why don't Ranma ask them to lock him in male form to cure his curse? (also, no idea why the author calls it the Kaisufu, that's not even its Japanese name) |
typo chapter 17 . 7/23/2019 dying - dyeing |
Guest chapter 15 . 7/23/2019 Why the hell would they try to save Mousse? He's a complete psycho how seriously tried to kill Ranma, and almost killed Ryouga. |
Guest chapter 14 . 7/23/2019 It seems a bit nonsensical that Kasumi is apparently Christian rather than Shinto |
Guest chapter 11 . 7/23/2019 Why is Ranma even stuck as a girl? Really makes no sense, they specifically chose not to use metal stapples, and at this point he should be healed enough. It's not like he's completely unable to shift when wounded, and if shifting shape while wounded would be catastrophic, he wouldn't have survived canon. |
Guest chapter 10 . 7/23/2019 Three glasses of champagne won't make him drunk, maybe a 5 year old girl, not a teenager, and certainly not someone who actually in good shape. |
Guest chapter 7 . 7/23/2019 This is just so stupid, Mousse have no honor, so don't deserve anything in return, delivering a challenge right after trying to assassinate someone tells that all too clearly. He's a cheat with the assassination attempt he already forfeited his match before it happened. It boggles the mind that after turning him into a duck they just let him get away, they should instead have caught him and kept him in a cage like the rabid animal that he is. |
Spokavriel chapter 12 . 7/6/2019 Erythromycin not the only one to get that prescription. |
King of fans chapter 7 . 7/2/2018 Interesting |
kax321 chapter 21 . 2/2/2018 As lemony as it may feel, the interactions, desires and intimacy felt real, and not divorced from what I experienced/observed in the least. The search for aceptance, and the fear of rejection are powerfull motivators when exploring one's sexuality and you managed to convey all that grief and uncertanty masterfully. So I say to you, thank you for writing this story. |
tacaloking chapter 21 . 2/15/2016 i think you made a good choice in going your own route because i seen good storys get completely ruin just because the writer was no longer was enjoying writing that story and while its annoying when a story is dropped when it becomes a chore the story suffers just as much as if it was discontinued if you can find a way to keep it fun then i think the story will show it i really enjoyed reading this and i think this was a great story that unlike many storys i read i feel like i went though a journey as i continued reading this story and that is a problem i think even people who write storys professionally have they have things happen but in the end it dont seem to have any long term effect on the character but everything seems to matter and even small things seem to help shape your characters and because of that this is probably one of the best examples i can think of when i think of well written fanfiction |