This was really good! At first it was very confusing, but as the story went all of my questions were answered, except one: What was it that he brought home from work? I like how we never find out in the story. It makes sense, since the Weasleys probably wouldn't know anyway, but I'm really curious now :P

3/5 It's an interesting story but it's a little too dense. Also, you skip the conversation with the hat, and here it kind of miss. I really like all the canon details you incorporate in the fic (like the mention of Harry), it's nice to have an exterior vision of Harry's sorting. I also like how you end your story, with a meeting. It's the first year, the first moment in Hogwarts but there is a lot to come and I think that meeting state everything. Good job!

The idea might not be the most fascinating of all, but you wrote this well (you're a good writer!), and I found Ernie's character at eleven fun and believable. The ending was cute. Well done!

Bonuspoints for this one as it is again my favourite pairing.

It feels like a fragment of a greater piece, like there is more than meets the eye. Very interesting and, as the others, beautiful and lovely.

Another brilliant piece. I loved this one as much as the first one. It is very emotional and leaves room for a lot of thoughts and feelings.

and it is my favourite pairing :-)

This was brilliant. I loved it alot. I can understand Narcissa's resistance towards Lucius. And her meeting Hermione marks a new start, a new beginning. An unfinished end?

The last line was brilliant. "This Narcissa was merely a shell of her former self and in all honesty that was the scariest thing of all."

This is a very interesting piece, and very well written.

Your characterization is lovely and the scenario raises enough questions to keep the reader interested. However, I wish you had given us a little more information about the situation, it's just too much of enigma, though we can certainly guess and infer.

I have to say, though, I really impressed with your use of the prompts. You've slipped them into the flow of this story excellently - they don't stand out at all, and honestly, I had to struggle to pick them out (which, in my opinion, is a good thing).

Nice job. :)

3/5 I still don't see how Hermione and Narcissa together. But I can't question it here. Your story fits the prompt, it's a little hard to understand it, but I love the explanation you gave. Your encounter with Hermione seems a little random and don't really serves the story. I quite like the vivid description paragraph at the beginning, but I don't see the link with the rest of the story. But I adore your ending and your explanation of her time with Lucius. Good job!

I totally understand that life can be busy :)

But here is my feedback:

Again, try splitting it into smaller paragraphs. It's just easier to read.

And it was sort of rushed, I do admit. There's not really any basis to this story. It has no foundation.

So I'm pretty sure this isn't one of your best. :P

Least to say, this was pretty interesting.

Though I might suggest splitting up your pretty large beginning two paragraphs into several smaller ones, just for the convenience of the reader. It sort of hurts my eyes. (;

But it was pretty good :) Just a little abrupt for my liking.

There doesn't really seem to be a central theme to this, and the whole entry seems quite scattered, actually. But I do think it was an improvement, better than your first, so congratulations on that.

Erm...I think you pretty much got everyone in character, though I can't really see Molly saying what she did towards Arthur and blaming him for everything that harshly.

It's just the whole organization of this that bugs me. The words and paragraphs and the descriptions are well done, though :P

Go Lions!

Somehow, this whole situation doesn't seem really realistic...in the sense that I don't really think Hermione would drinking alcohol with Narcissa in a bar...

Your descriptions are quite nice though, actually, it's just that much of the speech is a little awkward and some sentences can't flow properly...

But the use of your prompt was interesting. :) so well done, and go Gryffindors!

2/5 You did meet the challenge, we don't know which house your characters were :) It's a very sweet fic, but I had troubles following it. In the first paragraph, you describes things like it's the first time he truly sees her, when in fact, they are engaged. I think you could have stated that from the beginning. Also, even if I like the contrast symbolic, you don't explain why nor how. And it misses in your fic. It's a cute fic, but think you could have developed it a little more.

This was really cute and emotional. It seems very realistic how Narcissa would have problems dealing with such a choice. I like how you portray this couple.

The story seemed a little short for everything you were trying to say in it. But it was still good. :)

GO GRYFFINDOR!