this is one of my favorites! good job! i love the emotion in it and it really shows how they feel about each other! and you really channeled the characters into it too! good job! :)

I love this!

Filled with emotion and passion. Love Ron's last line!

Good Job!

~Claire Ride

Cute. So incredibly adorable :)

THIS is what we want to see in DH- Ron fighting for Hermione FINALLY :) This was awesome!

I like Ron's attitude. I do wish that you didn't mention the fighting for her in the summary to make his last lines more special.

That was great!

Oh my, that was the sweetest!

I really envy Hermione! I'd love to have him cry into my shoulder!

Brilliant. Loved Ron's last line.

Aw...this was so sweet!

Love, love, LOVE your depiction of Ron and Hermione, and absolutely adored Ron's last statement!

-He looked at her fiercely. "I'm doing what I should have been doing since the day I met you. I'm fighting for you."-

ADORABLE!

Keep writing, you're amazing!

Oh, oh, oh, oh, cute - kitsch, but amazing kitsch! So cute, I like it :)

And I like how you describe the feeling of loss and senselessness at the beginning.. great! makes me shiver.