this was really good

This waz amazing

i loved it plz plz plz write more

like dafpnie confronting fred or somthing

i lovr this fic plz plz plllllzzzz make it longer

Daphne needs more credit like this, I say! Loved this. My only critique is "Danger-prone Daphne" and "Danger-prone Fred," their names should have been capitalized. That didn't take away from how awesome you characterize Daphne, of course. :)

I like Daphne's perspective, very harsh, because she feels mistreated and indignant from Fred's antics. Wonderful work.

This was simply beautiful. Your style of writing for this piece was harsh, realistically spoken and held a completely untamed beauty. Honestly, I think this might be my favorite story on FF.

Thank you for writing such a brilliant piece!

Very nice. Definitely changed my point of view about her, that's for sure. The last line is amazingly well-placed and simple (although it makes the reader wonder).