Reviews for Assorted Romance
lemonsquare chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
it's refreshing in a story to see sasuke to have a genuine feeling for sakura, and sakura not to be so annoying like in so many other stories.

i love the way that naruto is always aggressive and forceful it just fit's his personality right. you should add more scenes of that!
Noodling chapter 12 . 7/12/2011
I didn't see that coming at all, so it was Sasuke huh. I should of saw that coming now that I read the last chapter over again lmfao, man I'm slow. Now I'm really curious of Sai's role in this story.

Thanks for the update before the trip, have fun ~
PropsAD chapter 12 . 7/12/2011
Sai and Sakura? Itachi and Sakura...? Don't leave her alone please! (and Lee doesn't count) This is good, keep writing :p
Shiona Acitiu chapter 12 . 7/11/2011
Wow...
Shiona Acitiu chapter 11 . 7/10/2011
Interesting...Update soon..
Noodling chapter 11 . 7/9/2011
I'm happy that Naruto finally has someone other than Sasuke to interact with. It was really nice of him to lend blood to Sai even though he's not supposed to. I wonder what role does Sai have in this, a friend? That'd be cool if Naruto fell in love with Sai, because I'm curious to see Sasuke's reaction, and Naruto will finally understand what Sasuke is going through: having a partner and a crush.

No complaints, can't wait to see how things progress. :)
Noodling chapter 10 . 6/25/2011
I kind of agree with kyokyon, about Naruto not having a backbone whatsoever. And it really irritates me to no end that Sasuke is using Naruto. He's not thinking about Naruto's feelings and he knows that Naruto loves him. He's very selfish about thinking he can have both him and Sakura with no complaints. And now he's manipulating to his advantage to get what he wants. Very Sasuke-like though, haha. So... good job? Lmfao. Can't really complain when the real Sasuke is like that. But Naruto isn't spineless, even if there were some moments that had me questioned.

But I do like the story, don't get me wrong. I just don't like how easily you, like kyokyon worded, "toss" Naruto around like that. He's too dependent on Sasuke, emotional wise. Physical wise I understand, with the blood sucking and all.

I don't want to review in only a negative sense. Your story is very original and I like that. I never read a story about blood sucking partners that depend on each other for food. So kudos for that. I'm very fond of Sakura, but I don't get why Sasuke is so in love with her and whatnot. Not very detailed about that part, or maybe it's because I tend to overlook the big idea.

As for plans to break the whole Sasuke-Sakura relationship up, it's really up to you since I'm unoriginal as heck. But I would LOVE you if Naruto found someone else to depend on. Just so he's in Sasuke's position and he won't be so overprotective.

I'll alert this story, even though Sasuke pisses me off. But he always does so no biggie (that's why I question myself why I like this dang pairing) :)
Shiona Acitiu chapter 10 . 6/25/2011
Whoa...Update soon..
Shiona Acitiu chapter 9 . 4/23/2011
hmm, interesting..
Ciaossu-Chaossu chapter 9 . 4/23/2011
If you're open to suggestions on how to break them up, Sakura could accidentally/purposely put Naruto in danger, causing Sasuke to snap and do something drastic

Ps. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Shiona Acitiu chapter 8 . 3/31/2011
Wow...Update soon...
kyokyon chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
ok, this story is really bugging me. Seriously. No, wrong wording...e characters in this story are really bugging me.

Sasuke; he's an asshole. Plain n simple, both in e manga n here. He expects naruto to just give him blood when he wants it while he chases some tail. Yes, sm bloodsucking partners r just tat, blood sucking partners, bt tat does nt mean he shld just discount their relationship as casual. He has no fucking respect for naruto other as a source of food. It comes through very clearly in e way e story is developing actually. And in e last chap, sasuke doing that 180, i dun buy it. Know why? Coz he's thinking of itachi n then he kissed naruto. He probably wants to make use of naruto as his bld source coz he needs to be strong so he manipulates naruto to his will. Did i mention i really dislike this sasuke?

Sakura; i need a blowtorch to flame her stupid self.

Naruto; why in gods name does he always end up being used n tossed like this? God, i dunno wat to say...hmmm, he shld just kick sasuke's ass for making use of him n just gt someone else. I know, nt as easy as it looks bt loving some ppl, like asshole sasuke, just leaves u empty. God, i love naruto bt he's also a bit dim...

Yup, so other than e fact that sakura is annoying, sasuke doing a very obvious 'i-will-lead-u-on' ploy on naruto to gt to itachi, naruto being a meathead by nt seeing that skank n dickface coming a mile away n still telling sasuke to choose (no point since sasuke is contemplating on hving his cake n eating it. Citing lee, neji n tenten's example was nt gd, sasuke. Naruto, gt a clue) was absolutely pointless.

So dear author, i hope my rant was mildly entertaining. P.s. R u writing a straight story infused wit a hint of yaoi or are u just adding sasuke/sakura to make e plot for sasu/naru even better? Coz e way e story is gg, it looks like e first option. Even if it was e 2nd option, i cannot help but dislike e way e characters are gg. Give naruto sm backbone would u? Thanks
Shiona Acitiu chapter 7 . 2/22/2011
Wow...Update soon...
1683200 chapter 7 . 2/20/2011
I like it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
XMistressChaosx chapter 7 . 2/20/2011
Mistress: You've been gone for two months. Grrr! Thanks for updating though! Let's see, no typos from what I could see or obvious grammar errors. So, yeah! Great job like usual. I'm glad to see Sasu-chan's confusion with his feeling. Although he should know at the end that he could lose the slut, but Naruto would never leave him or push him away. Just that simple.

Devil: I agree and I agree with your Sasu! Naruto shouldn't have kissed Sasuke like that Noe should he have made a mess. Blood is not an easy substance to clean. :( That was uncalled for especially since Sasuke was already his. Anyway as usual I totally like it and I can't wait till you update. Maybe Naruto should break it off and date someone like Sai or Gaara. Maybe Sasuke could understand how it feels for Naruto. Besides if that bitch can't accept Sasu for who he is then she doesn't deserve him at all.

Till next time,

*Devil's Mistress*
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