Reviews for Our Little Secret |
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![]() ![]() Sometimes in life, a person will come to you and say "When life gives you lemons-" You'll have to immediately bitch slap there face before you hear another niche proverb coming from the mouth of a delusional moronic individual fuckfall, dangerously controlled by there absolute retardness brain of a non-functional disaster chasm of a human being. But actually, horny me is good at reading lemons, this one wasn't that shitty. I like it. ;) So the whole 'shitshow' of mindlessly reading lemon was a payoff, great work with this. And I see you have improved. But anyways, fuck you, please fuck me, I am disgusting. I kill myself, and now I'm dead. *Bleah. |
![]() ![]() I very much enjoyed this. It was well written and made me want to continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() jesus that was fucking hot |
![]() ![]() ![]() you did amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() reading this i thought is was gonna end with kim saying i love you and shego acting as if kim was just a toy for her but i am so glad it ended with them both saying i love you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Real good, missed a hole, though. Thought that was where the double was going |
![]() ![]() That's cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() :)(:...dayum...first try at smut and this is the product...wow, I repeat, dayum. The little introduction and conclusion of the story is a nice touch. It made me laugh a bit. Honestly, I don't even know. This is some spectacular, sexy, hot as hell, written like a pro, hardcore smut. So damn awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I congratulate you sir, *Pats affectionately on shoulder* Well done on the smut. Awesome read. And you said you weren't good at writing it. Anyway, thanks for the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story and love these two together |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. Smut well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet! |
![]() ![]() thats so ... um ... its bue ... ti ... full? okay you know what fuck it it was hot sexy as fuck pretty epic in my book and i seriously think kim is going to end up in the hostpitull if they keep having rough sex soooooooooooooooooooooooooo all and all it was nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really hot. Why'd you repeat the beginning and end though? |
![]() ![]() ![]() '"I'm going to fuck you harder than I've ever fucked you before." She whispered in an almost threatening way.' - I lolled so effing much. |