Hahahahaha XD
Yeah i believe 1st timers would get this kind of things 2 happen well not that i would kno , but still it was really funny XD

Lolz

Fail sex, how I love them...XD Great job!

*rolls around laughing* xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

That was wayyyyy toooo funnnyyyyy LOOOOOOOOLL I loved itttt xD

Ahaha... I loved this one. It was so funny and oh so true.

Its only natural that there are some accidents about first sexual experiences but 99% of authors act if they never heard of it. (Or even recognized by theirselfs x'D) Good one!

Yeah! I enjoyed

and Ahaha! Allen was bit at...

thanks for written.

lolol! that was very.. enlightening XPP

XDDD that's pure brilliance~

loooved it~

Oh gosh. Pure genius is what this fic is! Definately different from other "first time" fics, but very refreshing. Imperfect indeed. But that is what makes it so hilarious for the readers. Allen's reaction to Kanda's attempted "sexy" look was just to funny. And seriously, if Lenalee's books are the yaoi/shounen-ai kind, oh Kanda do you have a lot to learn. No proper foreplay, tsk tsk. Great job!

I love it! funny sexy sweet

not to mention I love Allen and Kanda together:) have to go out and get the last few volumes..

hana

soooooooooooo funny!

lol that was hularious XD

nice work

-laughing too hard to review properly-

AWWWWWWWWWE! that was SO fucking CUTE! i swear to god, you just made me fall in love with Yullen again :D3 PLEASE WRITE MORE SMEX! I LOVE YOU !

and now THAT was a beautiful win XDDDD awesome! XDD