Awesome story so far! I hope Yoko and Kurama both develop more than just an obsession for her.

very cute
i love how kagome tákes in other...and one can say Hiei is the first who did not try t kill-hurt or take her as hostage so a very good sign for the future
but poor youko (the one back in old times) he trys to Play with her bevor he takes back he kit... but sesshomaru ad mirokou did realise it already, nobody comes between a bich and her babys...even when the kit-cub are both possible older hen the miko but still seen as Babys by youkai so she does it right way, protect teach and nurture like her own but youko will be tamed in no time too and learn what he can do or not when he wants sesshomaru or shippo or hiei to even let her near to also be a mate of her one day
hope you write more chaps soon

Hope you continue this is amazing

wow. I mean I love how you've interconnected the timelines to fit the storyline just right without giving too much away...but...that doesn't mean that you shouldn't update soon...

Wow, talk about an awkward meeting ;)

This is really really good! Please udpate soon! I want to read more!

please write some more. it's good. have kagome meet hiei at the dark tournament years later, with yusuke, hiei, kurama, yomi, and mukuro fighting in it.

i just imagine yuusuke hitting on Kagome and got burn by hiei while saying "keep your dirty hand off my mother detective"

I am liking the direction this one is going. I am looking forward to reading more.

I need this to be updated so bad

Incredible storytelling, I liked how each past and present episode didn't clash at all making me want to skip one timeline over the other since both are just as interesting and good. I hope you can update this wonderful story :)

please write some more. it's good.

Please update!

I know you have probably given up on this story, but I was following it when you still updated it and I wanted to let you know that it is one HELL of an interesting story. I hate that everyone how undertakes a story with Hiei as a kid ends up dropping them, but I know that life is a bitch and writing stories is not anyone's top priority. I just thought that I would let you know that this story still ranks in the top for most favorites. I am sure you would have several people who would be happy to see you update this. Anyway, I have left you one hell of a long review (sorry) but best of luck in this new year (I know it is almost February)!

UPDATE.. Update .. ~ We desperately need it.. Especialy me~~