Cool. Could you puleeeese try to continue this! ( that was NOT a question, do it :)

This is so funny! I loved the clown with the paintball gun. Update soon!

Hi! This was a really good story ! Hope u keep on continuing with it.I wish u the best of luck!- darkest dreams000

XD awesome, as always XD

oh, and last chapter, i reread so i could remember the story real quick, i saw jazz told a couple people to "be conspicuous". i think you meant "inconspicuous" because being conspicuous would mean making themselves completely obvious just sayin'

but try to update again soon please!

LOOOL great distraction!

oh please, please, PLEASE continue this! XD

Hahahahahhahaha can not contan laughter hahaha plz update son and I WANT A COOKIE CAN I HAVE A COOIIE TIFFANY GETS A COKKIE WHY NOT ME

"accept" not "except" the first one is like, being accepted or "i'll accept that" the second one is like everything EXCEPT something

uhh just so you know, melody would be a child "prodigy" and not a "prote'ge'". i know it means something, but i forget

Lol. Good job, can't wait for the next chapter.

Awesome! Update soon please!

You have an interesting idea...I can't wait to read more. One thing though; you have a few grammar mistakes here and there...

Awesome chapter! Update soon!

Woohoo! Another chapter! :D Another amazing and awesome chapter!

Yeah! Take that people! Trumpets always wake a person up! . . . Don't ask how I know this, I just do. :)

- "You know, if someone were to come in on that exact sentence, they might question your relationship."

*starts bursting out laughing in whisper volume even though it's really really late*

Jazzimile Jenzie, huh? I like it! Original, very original. :)

Family activity, huh. I'm guessing this means another robbery scene. Hooray! :)

Again, great chapter, Jazz!

~heart~

Awesome! Update soon!