Reviews for 5 Boys Who Broke Quinn Fabray's Heart
AlexisKeller chapter 1 . 8/8/2015
This is gorgeous.
I love Mike almost as much as Quinn, do thank you for this. :)
mrszabini chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
perfect, love your Quinn.
thecivilunrest chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
This was absolutely gorgeous. I love, love, love how you wrote Quinn especially, but the way that you wrote everyone was fantastic.

The last part had to be my favorite (though the part with Puck was definitely a close second) because oh wow, I can't even describe it but it was lovely.

Fantastic job. (:
reviewgirl911 chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
This was interesting to say the least. I liked the format, even if I didn't adore some of your couplings. Not sure where you get the Mike/Quinn or Matt/Quinn couplings from, but they work in this one-shot. I absolutely adore the Artie/Quinn part! Good work!
Ra4chel-the 4 is silent chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Better make that six now that she and Sam are broken up. :'(
Leia 96 chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
wow this was absolutely wonderful! why doesnt it have more reviews? well, it should. it's really an excellent piece. really and truly.
HRZN chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Mike's just awesome, really like your stories. Keep writing
KC-Chick chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Ooooh my goodness! I love this to pieces. (I have a really big soft spot for Quinn, you know this.)

This was especially beautiful:

Laughing one of those sad, watery laughs when she sees a gaggle of freshman boys watching them, Quinn pulls away and scrubs her hands over her cheeks. "You're going to be my next baby daddy by the end of the day, you do realize that?"

His grin is big and open and so genuine it makes her ache in places that are still healing. "Lucky me."

Thanks for putting a grin on my face, sweets. You're awesome.
brainchild chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
omg. you really are the patron saint of doomed ships. And that is awesome. I can't even tell you. This character study of Quinn was perfection. The style that you write in is beautifully poetic. I lovd the certain lines that just punch you in the face, like Puck sleeping with the first girl his fake ID let him meet, and her belly being empty still being a shock sometimes. I loved the details of how she met Santana and Britney, and how they were in er life before. You just did this so, so well. I loved this line most:

"Silence falls, but not one the kind she hates, like when Sarah talks about wishing the baby would just come out already and Mrs. Puckerman eyes Quinn like she's the Whore of Babylon, flavored Catholic, who broke her son. (Mrs. Hudson has her own version.) No, quiet with Artie always reminds her of being a kid. She wishes she could go back, stay there. All these things; babies and love and the hardest decision she'll ever have to make, she isn't ready for it."

I may officially be a Matt/Quinn fan. I loved her commentary on his dancing, and how his long limbs shouldn't be that graceful. I love that he was amused by her grabbing his shoe. And that he seemed so damned cool and patient and that she may love him for never asking about the baby.

I loved, loved, loved this so much.

Oh, and her and Artie being neighbors! And how his silence reminds her of being a kid, from that quote above. That was just perfect.

Great job!
NovemberDreamin chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
dude i SO have an irrational love for Mike Chang as well

cause i mean damn, he is FINE with a capital "F"

and he's asian

and a good dancer

and on Glee

and he's quiet

and we all know that quiet guys are hot :)
Mr Palmer chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
This is just lovely!

Is this a one-shot or will you be continuing?

PLEASE CONTINUE!

Mr Palmer
countingthestars12 chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
A lovely story, beautifully written. And the Mike/Quinn pairing, though unusual, worked very well in this story. I have to say that was my favorite part, followed by the part with Puck.

I agree with buduica about putting breaks between the sections. But other than that, besides some minor grammatical errors, I think this story is wonderful as is, even if it is unbetaed and was written at 5 a.m.

And I have irrational love for Mike Chang as well. Actually it's not irrational at all, because he's handsome and adorable and has a great smile and is a fantastic dancer, so how could you not have love for him? _
teskodanceparty chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
I too have an irrational love for Mike Chang, and even if I didn't I would still love this. it is beautiful
buduica chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
There is nothing irrational about loving Mike - that smile! Those moves!

And I totally think he would be really good with Quinn.

One bit of concrit: is it possible for you to put breaks between each of the sections? I think it would flow better if the scenes were distinct.
Sanna chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
This was very nice. Although, I still think Quinn broke their hearts - not the other way around, LOL.

Good job with this story!