| Reviews for All at Once |
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   Bluewarrior3 chapter 1 . 11/10/2019 Cute. I loved the naruhina moment:). And the sakura thing, well its your story and i feel that people who are getting upset sayin "sakura didn't love naruto she only said it so naruto wouldnt chase after sasuke" . its called a fanfiction for a reason, im kinda glad you did this b/c i always felt that sakura didnt desrve naruto in the first place. Thank you for your short story |
| gummy b3ars chapter 1 . 4/2/2015 nice one! |
| NaruHinaUntilTheEnd chapter 1 . 7/1/2013 I loved it |
| Hektols chapter 1 . 9/10/2012 Very touching. |
| Da Vicks Guy chapter 1 . 7/29/2012 Na not bad |
| just wondering chapter 1 . 5/12/2012 did you get the title from the movie "rat race"? cause it sounds damn similar to the grandfather quote. |
| NaruHinaFanCM chapter 1 . 12/18/2011 hmmm... this was nice, except it couldn't have happened, sadly. i wish it could have though. she wasn't injured to bed ridden status after the fight with pain because she was insta healed after the fight and proof of this is that she was in the background when he came back and everyone tossed him in the air. spoiler alert but they did meet during the war. what confused me was when they were talking again it didn't come up about her confession, but i was like "fine ill let that slide". then Naruto said now she's "saved HIM twice". now when has Hinata saved Naruto before the pain thing? its seriously ANNOYING me. this is what i'm talking about, last box bottom left corner: . |
| Anazarel chapter 1 . 1/23/2011 naah, I loved that sentence, I'd never heard it. And the one-shot too, of course |
| imatwilightfan chapter 1 . 12/30/2010 i don't find it cliche, the saying "good things take time and great things happen all at once".. i believe there is some truth in that..going back to the story, how i wish it wouldve happened along those lines but i guess you cant blame them since they are at war so dealing with personal stuff shouldnt get in the way of their duty as shinobi..naruhina fans could only wait and hope for their love to prevail..XD |
| hiNAru Aburame chapter 1 . 10/22/2010 Hi! i like it... |
| Lowbacca's Roar chapter 1 . 9/29/2010 Wow... You're good at this, you know that? Keep up the good work! |
| dragonball256 chapter 1 . 8/26/2010 Such a sweet story... Loved it... This should have happened in the story! |
| rtyuiojnfrtyui chapter 1 . 8/2/2010 I love it! Adore it!This is awesome! I just love the way u write~it always gets me really into the story!Great jobb! |
| Rose Crowess chapter 1 . 7/25/2010 Pretty sure Sakura was just lying about loving Naruto to relieve him of his sense of duty to fulfill his promise about Sasuke - she's an ass like that. But the NaruHina part was cute |
| creativesm75 chapter 1 . 7/22/2010 nice |
