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ggf1 chapter 1 . 3/26/2016 Great story. Interesting twists. |
cko2 chapter 50 . 2/17/2016 you seem to have chapter 48 twice from what i read though here. have to go back and recheck. not a bad story and different for a crossover and you really make jack trigger happy to the extre it seems in this case when the shoit hits the fan. nice story other wise. |
loretta537 chapter 46 . 11/12/2013 this is a great story, I cant wait to see what will happen next |
Guest chapter 7 . 9/29/2013 I was just getting into thus story... Buffy & Giles? too gross to read more... |
Peanut Gallery chapter 46 . 4/27/2013 GREAT STORY, True Characters to their Series, Great blending of Series, Well Twisted story line and clever use of Ethan as a half brother and instigator. Great I love it so far please write more. So ends a Fan suck up review, my inner critic is frustrated by your lack of fallibility. Thanks For a GREAT Read, Peanut Gallery |
fierynightangel chapter 46 . 4/22/2013 very cool! can't wait for more! hope all is well! |
Brenna's Urbangirl Projects chapter 44 . 4/21/2013 Another nice story. Hope you return to it soon. |
Ookami Sakura chapter 7 . 3/31/2013 tehe Tara/Willow/Oz is my favorite ot3 for this fandom! I'm so happy you wrote them in this way! |
Guest chapter 44 . 2/22/2013 Great story so far, good read, if you keep it going sagest you do a Dawn / Jon romance to bug the O'Neill/Buffy character. Romeo and Juliet with military/ Scooby gang conflict. Thank You, Peanut Gallery |
locardxchange chapter 43 . 10/28/2012 Okay, an ambitious story with so many different characters but you are making it work in overall. In BTVS world Buffy died twice and I get this is AU story but once you had her dieing three times then Giles says she died four times, typo maybe? I am going to follow the story and hope you update soon. |
Taeniaea chapter 43 . 10/15/2012 cool story |
Lalaith Quetzalli chapter 43 . 9/20/2012 There's so much I don't understand, and it goes beyond what you may possibly be mixing up concerning Stargate seasons, and both Stargate and BtVS canon). I mean, in the beginning it looked like Buffy and Giles had just discovered/acknowledged their mutual romantic feelings, right then; then you very recently implied that they've been together for longer, she even has a ring! I have nothing against their relationship, though I'm mainly a Bangel fan...still, I just don't like when writers say one thing, then say another entirely different one. Then Connor...did you forget about him? I mean, shouldn't he have arrived to Colorado, and to the mountain already? Last we knew of him he was in a plane. I don't know if Jack really is as bad as it seemed in this fic, or everyone just was in their last nerve. Still, while I may not like that he appeared as a total psycho...the whole scene when the group acted to take down their 'escort' and then SG-1 was totally awesome! I could practically see it in my mind, totally great! I also like what you did with Xander and Faith. Andrew threw me for a loop, I'm not sure why exactly but I was convinced he was gay...either I was wrong or you chose to change that as well. I like the tryad between Tara, Willow and Oz. And the scene when they reunited was absolutely breathtaking...also, Dawn. pretty badass! Loved that too! Cassie the same! When she stood up to the NID...it was great! So, I really hope the changes will stabilize, we'll find out where Connor is, and in general to read more of this fic! |
SeanHicks4 chapter 43 . 8/1/2012 Interesting chapter...guess that bad first impression is going to keep the Scoobs and SG1 from getting along untill they bond in battle or something... |
Kansas Scout chapter 43 . 8/1/2012 Ok I had to reread this from the beginning so I could remember much of it. You've kept with the idea all through the story. Remember plots are the basic path, but sometimes if it makes sense you can diverge from the path. The only error I've seen so far was the frequent use of Then when you meant Than. Then has to do with sequence of time and Than deals with comparisons. Just a bit of advice. |
EvilTheLast chapter 43 . 8/1/2012 Good update. |