| Reviews for Unlocking my Heart |
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OWLKEEPER101 chapter 1 . 7/7/2016 AWWWWWWW! this is sooooooo cute! I love it! |
Magiveth chapter 1 . 5/29/2014 Oh my God, this is like so old, but it's just so wonderful I have to review it! Great storyline! I like how you connected the words; you make the story flow. I also like that even though it's far from being plain, the words and comparisons you use are uncomplicated and easy to read (THANK GOD seriously since my native language is not English). I, too, enjoyed the storyline and how the characters were handled, none of them felt OOC. I mean, Shadow actually feels more or less like Shadow which I consider a big, fat and amazing plus. Except maybe... Well I reckon the reason why Sonic was handled the way you did was because Shadow here owns certain distasteful feelings towards Sonic, am I right? I mean, I want to consider he wasn't a douche in the story. (I could be wrong though, in which case, forgive my impertinence). Consider yourself pleased. You gave me the feels. "Amy had to still love Sonic. She had to – she did… Didn't she?" OH NO SHE BETTER NOT. NOW GO KISS HER SHADOW OK. Um... You never read that. |
TheMaskedSnivy123 chapter 1 . 7/29/2013 I love how in character Shadow is. This story is awsome. |
KazunaPikachu chapter 1 . 12/26/2011 Awwww, this was cute! :3 I loved it! Shadow was completely IC and so sincere. Go figure, since it WAS his POV X3 I lol'd at the thought of Shadow being Amy's stalker XD Thank you for writing something so beautiful! |
bruja-esme chapter 1 . 7/24/2011 awww i luv it |
DgShadowChocolate chapter 1 . 8/19/2010 This was simply beautiful. The emotion in Shadow was delivered perfectly and flawlessly. I'm happy it is a one-shot, because...well... it's perfect that way. It's completely Shadow, 100% Also, I saw the art work done by Jazzy. B. Real based off of this story, which is simply amazing. I give you extreme kudos for this excellent story! |
Heavens Paradise HP chapter 1 . 8/17/2010 AWW! SOOOOOOOOO CUTE! |
MarkOfAlitheia chapter 1 . 7/10/2010 IEEEEEEE! I LOVE THIS STORY! It's SO sweet! You've captured his personality P-E-R-F-E-C-T-L-Y! You're really good at writing shadamy! Keep it up! Happy Writing! _ |
Lucky-9-Rose chapter 1 . 7/9/2010 Amazing oneshot! I absolutely loved reading it! The description caught my attention immediately. The whole story was completely interesting and created its intended emotion, especially when I was reading it. You write Shadow's POV really well:) A definite favourite! |
Rafael Pereira chapter 1 . 7/5/2010 I hope she didnt. |
Project Shadow chapter 1 . 7/4/2010 Very cute~! X3 I love it when Shadow is like that~! X3 |
TooLazyToLogIn chapter 1 . 7/2/2010 aaaaaawwww how cute! that was a cute little story. and really it doesnt need to be more than a one-shot considering its pretty much a side-story anyway. :) |
Nite Valkyrie chapter 1 . 7/2/2010 Aw! Too bad is an One-Shot... But it was awesome anyways, very sweet and oh! How wrong Shadow is X3! He is the Ultimate Life-Silly when is about feelings, can't blame him, but can't resist call him like I just did xD! Cool story, I hope reading another one of yours when you have it ready, keep going! ~ Elys |