I'm reading this for the n-th time now and it is simply perfect. The characters, the fluff, the sex - simply perfect :-) Awesome job! They are my favorite pair in JR because they are like a normal couple with all their struggles and obstacles. I adore Hiroki, you pictured him wonderfully :-)

Yes! You managed to pull it off PERFECTLY! THANK YOU! X))

when i read the summary, i was like WTH, but i decided to read it anyway, and my friend, you have made the people of fan-world proud! XD

This is actually the best hiroXnowaki fix I have ever read...you did a great job. I hope you write more!

Oh. My. God. I just died and came back to life. That was soooo amazing. The feels a suffocating me. *w*

Absolutely fantastic. I haven't read a story this good in a long time. Job very well done

VERY well done! I think they are both in character(s?) I enjoyed reading your story! I think you should write at least one more fic about this couple. Also, why don't you try Miyagi and Shinobu? I think you'll manage to make them in character too, and they are not very popular, after the main couple of Misaki and Usagi. Hm? Does that count as a request? ;)

Oh my God, that is amazing. It's so beautiful - the description is just the right side of graphic, and the words you choose... This is an amazing price of writing, and you managed to get the characters spot on, even in their altered roles. There is no way this couldn't go into my favourites, so congratulations on writing something so wonderful, and thank you for letting people read it :)

Typically I don't review fanfiction mostly because im to lazy to do so but wow that was amazing. You are truly an incredible writer and honestly that was one of the best pieces of fanfiction I've ever read. Keep it up.

I really liked it (: if I could think of any requests, then trust me I would type away. Regardless though, your writing is awesome, and I really like your style! Keep up the excellent work.

Oh my goodness the more times I read this the more I love it (It takes me a few reads to understand and process a few things not that your story was confusing it's mostly me U). I read some of you other stories and I fell in love with your writing style (I even spent an entire day reading a D-Gray Man fic of your just to finish it and I loved it. Okay now I'm getting off topic). I was ashamed of myself when I didn't review at all so I decided to now (I still feel pretty stupid for not reviewing the stories I've read so far).

Okay now time for the my real review.

I loved the fluency and the detail just seem to fit together. I didn't catch any grammar or spelling mistakes and that's always good.

Let's see, let's see. Gosh it's so hard to write a really good review. I usually write all the peppy reviews filled with 'You did an awesome job way to go!' kind of crap (excuse my language). Your writing had really influenced me to be better at somethings starting with reviews (Trust me my writing is a complete and total mess). Anyways back to the real review.

I noticed that when I first read this I didn't catch them being out of character. Now that I read it again I somewhat thought they were out of character. For the most part they were in character and I could see this being somewhere in the actually story line. It's something that I really enjoy to read. When the characters are in character (I tend to read or write something that's out of character). It one of those special stories that I really enjoy reading.

Okay I think I'm going to chicken out now and say that I've finished my review. (I often compare myself to others and I completely doubt myself that I'll be able to do anything)

I hope that you didn't find it a waste of time reading this and that you don't hate me now. I promise I'll review your other stories I missed to review. Thank you so much for this story. I loved it

Oh my. This was amazing! You managed to keep Hiroki and Nowaki perfectly IC in a situation that would be incredibly difficult to manage. I love how this was a growth in their relationship and a celebration. I loved how afterwards you hinted at this being something that Hiroki actually needed to overcome some of his issues.

Not to mention the sex in this was written so well! That's not an easy thing to do! You really managed to capture Hiroki's arousal and nervousness and make the entire thing REALLY, really sexy.

One of my favorite lines was this:

"Except one.

Just one thing and it burned like fire inside of him."

I thought it was just perfect phrasing and timing.

The whole thing was well executed and I LOVED IT. I think it's one of my very favorite Egoist fics. I'll be recommending this on my LJ in the near future too.

And because I have to be one of those annoying people: I'd love it if you wrote more for this couple. You've got such a good grasp on their characters and you don't rush a plot line. That is such a problem even in well written fics, but you took your time and explored this in the perfect length. I love to see what else you could come up with for this couple.

In any case, thanks for the lovely read.

You wrte this wonderfully 3

In the (very few) fics where I've seen Hiroki topping Nowaki I'd say that this is deffinetly the best one. You wrote their emotions quite well and the auctual sex was very sweet!

Although I can't help but wonder why there aren't any switched roles in Nowaki's POV? I mean , every single one I've ever read was in Hiroki's!

I'd like to see one of those one day :D

oh gawd.. i drooled. *four thumbs up*

yay for the fluff!