Wowie, I guess that I don't know that much about Veelas after all XD

I love this

Wow this is aamazing! Please think about updating soon! 3

Omg I want more! T_T you're such a good writer of this pairing, the last time you update is 2010... Can I put my hope on this? Please please continue it! This is too good to be abandoned.

wow, I never thought iI would be able to read slash and incest but your summary and the way you wrote compelled me to read this. and well I really likes the ashwindler incident fanfic you wrote!
I like the plot and the twist that what albus felt may have been not true. that he was hoodwinked.
I actually like the french thing, as their "secret language" I hope you continue on and update soon.
maybe it could be all tragic like. they would grow apart but suddenly meet again after many years and realize thy still have the same intense passion and love, and then maybe finally run off until their families realize they are meant for each other.

omg that was really long. sorry, maybe I was in thw mood of being such a romantic sap :)))) anyway, kudos this fic and other fics you have relating tto this! :

Lovely! I hope you update soon!

Loved it. Next chapter?

I wondering what will it love to know the ending.:)

I love what you did with making both Dom and Louis gay... Eat your hearts out fangirls/boys :D

This is wonderful. I'm really enjoying this story; here's to hoping you'll update soon and continue this engaging fic. :)

It's been about a year since you last updated but I still can't help but check once a week for the past few months in hope you would continue this amazing story! You have made me fall in love with this pairing and I hope you would find the inner drive to finish such a beautiful master piece! 3

Love this fic! Keep writing you just got to the drama! ;)

Hi!

I read your fanfiction three times and I just love it. It's cute and the relationship between Louis and Albus is awesome. It's too bad there isn't any fanfiction about Louis & Albus in French, there are so sweet together! You made me discover this pairing, thank you!

I'm sorry if I don't speak English very well, it's not my mother tongue. I wanted to tell you that you made three little mistakes in your traduction. Your sentences have a meaning but we don't say that in daily life.

-chapter 1: "Je veux tenir votre main." "Je veux tenir ta main." (Albus and Louis know each other, that's why he says "ta" and not "votre")

-chapter 2: "Je ne désire pas vous perdre." "Je ne veux pas te perdre." ("désire" is too formal here, and as in the sentence before, they know each other and say "tu" instead of "vous")

-chapter 6: "Elle préfère des femmes." "Elle préfère les femmes" ("des""some", when you put "les" you speak about women in general).

Thank you for this wonderful fanfiction!

Reading a LW/ASP fic is a first for me, but you've done an excellent job portraying it. :D

I love this pairing ;D

Hope you keep writing!