I just had to laugh at this:

"in Nala's mind…even Scar was not so cold as to kill a cub by his own claws."

Poor deluded Queen. Scar would order his hyenas to kill the cub, so his own claws wouldn't get bloody. It's only because hyenas are bad chasers that Simba got away.

Wonderful! A true masterpiece. Again, loved the emotions between the characters and your little twists and turns from your imagination that were wonderfully portrayed into you wonderful fanfic. Good job!

Hi um could you do the part in The Lion King just after Nala tries to eat pumba? At that song part? I loved to see read in Nala's prespective... thank you!

Great one shot

This one-shot was wonderful! You had everyone in character..all the lines down perfectly..great awesome job!

This is great! And you're really good at descriptions. :) *favs*

What a great one-shot! You caught Nala perfectly, well to me you did. I'd love for you make more. I really liked how you kept bouncing back and fourth between the confrontation between Simba and Scar to the argument betweent Nala and Simba. It actually made you think or make you, also see why Simba acted a certain if you didn't know his story. The mind thinking was was awesome. I would like if you can, do some more one-shots for Nala, but maybe for lion King 2, you know since hse was barely in it! That irritated me lol. But yes, keep writing!

Your writing is amazing!

It is extremely descriptive, powerful, realistic and detailed...all while holding the reader's interest. Perfect.

I liked the way you've characterised Nala and how she was perceptive enough to realise what her comment about Simba's father had meant to the lion.

Well done, I loved it!