Plot? Where did you go!? Come back!

RIGHT! ;)

I-need-to-cry. Oh my great gogglely gosh. I love kill bill and you just bashed away everything I thought I knew about mass effect. MUST READ IT! yeah this basically means, damn you did a good job and I uh didn't even finish this yet. I WILL THOUGH!

What a strange yet wonderful discovery, finding this fanfic was.

... This story is awesome. I've never seen kill bill but you're story makes me want to haha. please tell me chapter 13 to part 2 is coming out soon? I'm SO anxious! And I cried about little Ares... he's so adorable!

Where you wrote "baron" I believe you meant "barren"

Ch. 15: "perethrial" Peripheral

Where you wrote "baron streets" I believe you meant "barren"

Ok, the end of this chapter nearly made me fall off my chair... Epic explanation.

As much as I like this story and your style of writing, I can't really picture Shepards crew going Deadly Viper Assasination Squad on her. Still, I enjoy it and will make my way tothe sequel for more delicious bloodshed. Happy Writing.

So, lemme get this straight: just after ME2, Shepard decides to turn her back on the galaxy and her whole crew, drop off the grid, and settle down? No notice? Even while the Reapers are coming?

Sure, the crew trying to kill her, Kaiden and unborn child at her wedding, plus multiple times afterward, is somewhat excessive, and OOC. But... why would it warrant a complete and total vendetta against everyone except Zaeed and Kasumi, including gunning people down in front of their own children?

Don't get me wrong - this is pretty good, and probably the only time that Mass Effect will ever fit into a Quentin Tarantino plotline. However, now I need to crack open the old DVD case, because now I really wonder whether Beatrix was such a (REDACTED) in the movie.

Im kinda sad Tali died, she also had a kid and all... BUT she was such a bitch! Shep saves her TWICE and helps her to not be EXILED but she goes ahead and kills Shep and ruins her life. God her crew are just full of ASSHOLES! Great story btw! :D

yaay! you finished it! enjoyed the last chapter. very excited to see how volume 2 turns out :)

I love you! OMG I cant wait. Im dying here. D: I love Garrus, but I could see his ass doing something like that. :/ And it makes me sad that Shepard IS going to kill him.

i was admittedly a little skeptical of the concept when i started reading, but you've done a good job so far of combining the two stories. i'm interested to see how much you continue to hold to Kill Bill and if it at all shifts from that story arc.

there are a couple grammar mistakes (your vs you're, some tense issues) but they don't take away from the overall story.

look forward to reading more

Tali, I hope you liked Shepard's gonna find you, tear your mask off, and show us WTF you look like. Then blender you.

Enjoying this a lot, please continue.