Good start. Hope you can continue and we find out what happened to Lorne.

HI! If you see this please consider continuing your story it's one of the best I've seen here!

You have to update! Just as it was about to get interesting you stoped. Shame on you!

But i really do like it and right now I'm wondering what si going to happen. Will he get worse becouse of the drugs(or whatever it is..)? Or will he get better? Is he going to have more of these(as I'll call it) flashes?

You have to write!

Poor Evan ... I hope they'll be able to help him.

You are an excellent writer, and I adore how wonderfully long your chapters are! One thing you do very well is suspense. I am completely intrigued :D

Really liking this so far :) Alot of questions which i like the uncertainty about. I look forward to your next chaper :D

Really enjoying the mystery and the action. Who is this? Is it Lorne under the influence of drugs? What does the scientist have to do in this? I liked the way parrish reacted with Lorne and I'm glad Sheppard listened to Lorne and decided to check out the scientist. Lookiong forward to more.

Great story!

I want - no - need to know what exactly happened to poor Evan. :)

Can't wait for more!

Oh dear... what's happened to Lorne and who is this Mulroney guy?

Update soon!

Wow! The tension just keep getting better! Looking forward to seeing where this goes. I have my suspicions, but it's still too early to tell. Loving the story, though. Can't wait to read more!

eek! that's so gross! what happened to lorne? .

Awesome story, I'm curious where this is going.

I seriously LOOOVE Lorne Whumpage :D

Update soon please!

This looks interesting, I love Lorne / Shepard stories, looking forward to the rest.

Wow! What happened? Great start to the story! I'm already hooked.

If you're open to this type of thing: "Doc Keller had taken things particularly hard. Her and Lorne had grown close. . . ." Should be "She and Lorne had grown close. . . ." Remember: if you take out the second name and "she" still works, use it. If it doesn't, use "her." Or "him" and "he," depending on the gender of the character. Otherwise, wonderfully written!

hmm.. do I sense some twist where Lorne has been changed into a Stargate Atlantis wolverine.. minus the claws?

what did those freaks do to lorne and what will sheppard and gang do to them in return :) cant wait to find out :)