Such a good story!

Hey, I just found this story and wanted to tell you it's excellent. Great imagination, story telling and characters. I'm hard pressed to believe you'll finish it after all this time and have no idea what's going on in your life. But if you find the time, will and inspiration, I think it's worth the shot. At any rate, great job on what you've done and I wish you the best.

I'd love to see this story finished. It truly is intriguing

So Edward is just out and about...comes across a girl and decides to talk her home and tie her up naked? Does Edward do this a lot? and WHY?

So glad I came across your story. I really liked the Edward and Bella you created and looking forward to seeing what you have in store for them next :)

bellas kind of pathetic...its all...Edward gets mad and then bella backs down...

funny all he has to do is fuck her and it makes everything better...bellas a pathetic fucking whore!

He treats her like shit because she fucking lets him

Can't wait to read more!

I really hope you finish this story. It is really good.

hes a total douchebag he just told bella that he wasn't willing to help her and was just going to leave her there...and shes the one begging him...fuck that!
don't be so pathetic bella, if he plans to ditch your ass he must not really give a fuck about you.

this is a truly great story and i have infinite love for your Bella. she's sassy and headstrong and smart and passionate. please update this story when you have a chance- i'd love to see how it ends!

Such a good piece and very good writing style. Love love love. obsessed.

Here's a poem that I wrote, inspired by your fic.

I am young, I can wait.
Darkward, my guilty pleasure
Since 2008.

Everyday and every night
Under stormy wind and starry night
I pray touch screen rings alight
And an update grace my sight

Please update.
Love your fic.

Great story! Hope you find the time and inspiration you need to finish it.

please please finish it