This Edward was such an asshole. He didn't fight for their friendship one bit. I was not satisfied with the ending. Bella just gave in too easily. I had hope she'd kick his ass. At least she was more up front with Alice. This Edward was too shity.

This was fun and sweet but I hope you do expand/change it eventually. It did feel a little rushed at the end but what I really want is to experience them actually interact. We really only get this one "true" interaction at the end and it makes it hard to see why they should be together or how it will be when their walls are down. I think that addition would be really satisfying to read :)

Awwww!

Thanks. Good story.

Bella saying No to him at the beginning, after he didn't talk to her for so long showed how strong she was! I loved her strength!

Hope things will work out for them and he learned his lesson about friendship! Bella deserves the best, she's real!

Thank you for your story!

I think that the ending was cute! I would love a few more chapters to it if you get the chance :D

Aaah! It's so good! My mind is blown.

This Bella is totally a badass, so the ending doesn't correspond to her. She should be tearing him apart for years of separation, for not being man enough to ask her and not trick her, for embarrassing her. She would need more time for Edward to convince her. By the way this Edward doesn't impress me , such a coward and no apologie whatsoever for their lost friendship.

Honestly how is this bella anything but a irrational immature bitch? She literally ignored this guy for years because of jealousy and to really honest, the whole edward dating was thrown in for literally no reason, and this is one of those cases where you, the writer, has edward says things about bella YOU did not write in her.

Such a great story!

loved this story and yea i think it could use another chapter or two, them going back into the dance hand in hand and everyones mouth hanging open, hope you decide to add more to this story

Oh my god! I loved this story! That was the cutest thing ever!

A very thought out, perfectly portrait story!

Yes! Please do! I would love to know more about it! It was a amazing journey and I love how you portrait Bella character and how she isn't afraid to kiss some assets and be true to herself. ( I'm just like her and I really love how you almost describe me.. Hahaa... Well, minus the abusing and all. But I love it!)

Anyways, it was fully thought out and perfectly portrait story. And as aforementioned, I love it!

Their was love, laughter, cry, a little of angst, saddness, embarrassment, etc.

Great write!

Please do another one as you'd mentioned in your note. I would love to read more of this. Especially, if you decided to do an Epov!
Thank you!

I'll like to read a few more chapters of these two... I think Bella needs to tell him how she felt when they stopped being friends, and I would like to hear from Edward when he started to miss Bella.

Cute story. Would love to read more. Thanks for sharing.