Great story!

Update

That was such a plot twist I literally started freaking out with Sasuke. This is amazing, and I like a lot of your other Naruto stories. Keep writing in the future (if you aren't already) w you're really good at it!

It was really good... I cried. Please don't delete!

I don't really get it :/ but I guess I'm just an idiot XP

It definitely didn't cross my mind that sasuke was already you know...it surprised me. Anyway, te story was fantastic.

I loved it, it was so emotional, tears formed I'm my eyes. I'm happy that they got to be together at the end. :'3

Awwwwwwwwww that was sooo cute!

i loved this story!

I think my heart just asploded!

It was luvly

This has been in my favourites since you posted it, pretty much. I've actually ready it so many times, and I honestly cry every time. This is an amazing story, it's perfect.

Blast from the past, Sixth Sense style!

Honestly, loved the piece. However, unless it's a well-rounded critique then I feel a review is practically worthless. The second half of the chapter: perfect. The first half could've used a /bit/ more description of the utterly suffocating loneliness of it all, to fit the bitterness of Sasuke's relevation more. Gaara showing up might've been nice, but also a bit awkward and too overdone (showing up at Naruto's side.). Glad you left that out, for many I know (myself included) may have made that (possible) mistake.

The flashbacks were well done and sweet. More to-the-point than many I've come across. Perhaps an extra one, showing Naruto and Sasuke get a little closer than before (as the last one before the incident was from when they were eighteen and your timeline has them moving in together when they were around twenty/twenty-one), maybe not, "Oh, Naruto... I love you! Be my boyfriend!" but something along the lines of " Sasuke turns his head. 'What I'm trying to say, deadlast, is that I like you.' Naruto blushes."

And my final critique is on the fact that it's never quite understood whether Sasuke fell to a car accident as well or whether the five figures he saw were attacking him. He attributes it to an attack that somehow took his memory away by forcing him to pass out or something, but we know that his conscious mind is blocking out the image of his death. An allusion to it, not a terribly long confession, but one in which Naruto says "Why'd they have to choose you to mug?" or "Why'd that bus have to hit /you/?" while crying at his grave would've been nice. After Sasuke realized he was dead, or before, it really doesn't matter, if you kept the pronouns ambiguous enough.

I think that's enough for my critisms, though. Sorry if it makes me sound like a terrible person or something, I really did love your story. If I hadn't, I wouldn't have wasted my time writing such an unbelievably long review. I would've kept it short and sweet, or wouldn't have bothered at all, if I didn't think you were an amazing author with severe talent. Your wordchoice is astounding, and truly evokes the scene. Not too many people on here nowadays, at least on the Naruto side, can claim that anymore.

Here's to hoping you don't take this the wrong way!

-ShikonnoTamahater

How sweet. This was so sad, and very well written. I am glad they get to see one another again.

OMG...so lovely n sad,i cry when i read tis story!

i like the ending part,when a newborn baby called naruto was born in a ninja village,(cute!)

elaine / sora-tan,

hope 2 read more of ur fanfic in the future!