They were just so cutely awkward and described what your first time is really like.

XD that ending!

Fantastic

Ah finally, a story that portrays a first time as it really is. This is a wonderful read; even the pairing was good(though, truthfully, not one I've considered).

that was the sweetest,cutest, most akward thing i have ever read...lol it was funny and nice. i loved it. keep writting!

Omg..the last part pwned! XDD

A very awesome written story and has that comedic stuff at the end

Awesome job! Keep it up :D