OH MY GOD
WHEEZING
AAAAAAAAHHH MY STOMACH HAS CAVED IN ON ITSELF
I THINK THIS IS THE FIRST TIME A STORY ON THIS SITE HAS ACTUALLY MADE ME LAUGH OUT LOUD

cute story. I enjoyed a lot

Lovely Harry/Hermione fic! Gives me all the feels!

I loved your story. I love HHr!

Should have stopped at chapter 3.

nice ending :D

Great job. best prank on Snape ever!

TGM

Going to take Ron a while to get over this, as he fancies Hermione but doesn't realize it yet. Maybe Lavender can take his mind off of them, just earlier than in canon.

TGM

Then dialog wasn't sappy at all. It pointed out their dynamic, their shyness at confessing their feelings.

IMHO, the dialog was prefect.

TGM

Your description of the Potions class is very good. You've put flesh onto the bones that JKR gave us in canon. Harry's, hermione's and Ron's reactions are perfect.

Looking forward to reading on.

TGM

A good first chapter. I've seen this theme a number of times, but those stories postdate yours I think.

And so, one of the great Harmonian themes arises, 'How to get two people, both in love with each other to talk about their feelings?'.

The subplot 'problem' with Ron is trivial in comparison. Either he's jealous and they find they can do without his 'friendship', or he accepts their relationship.

Fleur may or may not be a problem.

TGM

Fun and fluffy story. Thanks

Yeah! A genuine representation of Ron! Nice!

Sweet romantic story without character bashing. Well done.

Nice short story, Two insecure teenagers realizing something and not totally running away from the situation, wich is of course realistic. Good reading.