Reviews for Their Private War
Isa chapter 5 . 3/24/2019
Your story is so beautiful and well written. I know it has been a long time, but wouldn't you think about continuing it?
Bram Watley chapter 5 . 2/23/2019
Please continue!
Guest chapter 5 . 5/30/2016
Will you please update story soon.
Kali-blue chapter 5 . 12/23/2012
This story has a great beginning. Shame that you haven't been able to continue it just when it is getting angsty and good. I like this mature Narcissa and Hermione and their attraction.
ShalimarMars chapter 5 . 11/18/2012
So...are you just going to leave it? I really want to know what happens. This is well written and a great story line, I really hope you will continue.
DoCtOrWhOlUvEr11 chapter 5 . 9/1/2012
Please update soon! I don't usually read stories with a pairing like this, but it's really good and you've got me hooked! : )
ScOut4It chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
I really like this pairing and how you are writing the internal musings of Hermione and Narcissa.

Parts that stood out to me:

/Yes, Narcissa thought. That had been Hermione's only weakness. Marrying the Weasley boy./

(Although he apparently is also a good breeding machine and she lucked out with Rose)

/She had loved her unknowingly, silently. She had loved her so secretly, she herself didn't even know. Until now./

I like the late discovery. If she knew earlier then I'd be annoyed at her for not acting on it.
Cissa-Lycoris-Black chapter 5 . 10/27/2011
Please update again soon! This is getting so exciting and was that Ron who Hermione saw? I hope you'll let us know soon! :). Looking forward to more!
LethalPoison chapter 5 . 10/11/2011
Amazing story so far I can't wait for next chapters :)
SleepyLuna chapter 5 . 6/11/2011
T.T
Eryk Lestrange chapter 5 . 8/6/2010
spying Ron? very mature
aaaaaaaaamfjghjfj chapter 5 . 7/31/2010
Come on girls, get it together! :D was that Ron in the trees or some other Weasley member? I can't wait for the next chappie! :D
Eryk Lestrange chapter 4 . 7/14/2010
ladies, can't you two realize that you're in love with each other?
aaaaaaaaamfjghjfj chapter 4 . 7/14/2010
Awh, come on guys just dump your respective husbands and get married! :D Lol But i love all the angst in between really. :D
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