I loved it! Please keep writing!

what? did she actually kiss him and stay for a while and eat or leave right after?

lololololol! I love your story . I was reading it, and when stories are complete, I usually just wait till the last chapter to review, but I noticed that she watched Fox and the hound . Corey F. did the voice of the puppy in there, which is I'm sure why you did it, but it was awesome none the less .

This last chapter is my favorite! Why? Because there was a great scene at the end between Edgar and Erika! :)

Very entertaining! I really like Erika and Edgar together. They are good for one another I think. :)

Erika clearly cares about Edgar - I hope he feels as strongly about her. She is a smarty pants, but that's one of the reasons I like her.

Good chapter - I especially liked Mr. Leroy's comment at the end! :)

Awesome chapter! I really enjoyed how Erika's father forced the ultra-girly outfit on her for the dinner at Lucy's!

The water gun fight was completely awesome as was the little chat with Lucy. Very well done! I did read in your author's notes that you missed The Thirst at the San Diego Comic-con, I'm bummed out for you. I heard through the grape vine that The Thirst was well received.

Awwww! Yayyyy! all the bloodsuckers are dead! i kind of feel a little sorry for Britt though, she got cooked to death...but only a little! this was the most awesome fight ever! please write one more chapter! :)Jess

Awesome! I liked the eye milk. :P

OOO - she kissed him! Love Edgar and Erika together, they fit so well. She'd really going to have to learn to stop running into vampires all over Santa Carla. :)

Erika and Edgar are really great together! I'm enjoying your story very much. :)

The realtionship between Erika and her father is awesome! Clearly they love each other a lot and its slightly goofy as well. Great job! The last part of the chapter I really enjoyed too - it seems to foreshadow poor Erika's future.

Erika is great, I'm really enjoying her interactions with Edgar and Alan. Now that she knows vampires are real, will she end up being trapped by them?