I hope you decide to finish this. You're a terrific writer!

I want Edward in handcuffs!

Lel... tall words from a women like bella...

I fucking love a Bella that is kick ass strong!

Wonderful story. It had me from the first chapter. Please keep writing the saga of our Edward and Bella.

i'm glad it was bella who shot him...I wonder how these two will be telling Bug about how they got married?...can't wait till the epilogue

looking forward to the epi

when he calls her "my queen" i just about die.

i forgive him for the deceit. and when he said he's usually a dom... well, isn't that just the sweetest thing anyone could have done? you give us exactly what we want and still leave us wanting more.

"Well King, this Queen needs a…well, she doesn't really need a King, she prefers a Yours. But how about showing me your scepter?"

i love that line!

did not see that coming! and the balls jasper has... i love me some jasper but edward being the hero? swoo-fuckin-oon! and wait! he and em are brothers? you're killing me. it hurts so good

*tsk tsk* jasper. you know what they say about assuming things, right?

i vote for double penetration with bella sprawled on the desk. rose can join in for some lickage or nipple tweakage.

and i was right before...this has so much depth! and hopefully by depth, it's about the depth at which eddie's cock penetrates! i love this bella and i love the spin you put on the overdone bdsm genre.

gunmetal armani and christian louboutins! give me! i'll take the vodka martinis while your at.

"He liked it hard, rough, usually for lunch, and I had him wrapped around his own dick." I love this! Bella is a spitfire and harsh. Lurve her!

I swooned a little when Jasper called her "Beller." That and his "ready-for-me" dick.

Ahh got to love an Edward and Bella interaction that's straight to the point. What an interesting spin for her personal life. I think I'm going to like where this is going.

GT suggested this story. I like it so far! Very good job!

So terrifying

Nice

Getting scary