Wow this is a single chapter

Meep meep meep

This was a great story!

Thanks very much, Pierre! Super great reads! Only sad part I could think of was that Belldandy wasn't able to preserve her virginity like her love inteterst because of her duties as a goddess first class, second category on rare occasions. That was the only sad part that she wasn't also a virgin with Keiichi, but overall I really loved reading your fantastic reads. For anyone who's into love devotion romance can't help but shead some tears and get emotional in what you've wrote in this series. It's fabulous! I also enjoyed another writer who wrote on his/her version of post AMGseason2 tittled: "Test of A God", which I enjoyed, but your writings are much more cleaned and well written that I couldn't help but give it an A! Ok, maybe just an "A" because you weren't able to have preserve the nature of Belldandy to avoid those 'hiccups' that Peorth enjoys in her work! lol. Thanks for the great reads, sir!

the story goes, GODLY Love is giving one's all, even one's life. few people ever find true love and even keep it. this story is so uplifting and joyfull. I Love it. Giving oneself for the other person, that is what Jesus done.

This is wonderfully awesome! I was jumping around and cackling all over the place as I read this (that's news to me; I can cackle)I do wish this was in seperate chapters, just so that I could review each one. There's just so much I want to comment on. Oh well. In any case, this is a truly great read.

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Emboldened by Peorth's comment Keiichi replied "I may be a wimp when it comes to everything else, but if it's Belldandy we're talking about, I stand down to no one."

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Greatest. Line. EVER!

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Note- Just learned that there is a edited version of this. Checking it now

Great fic! I really enjoyed it, and I don't agree that Belldandy was painted in a bad light. I think you got her spot on, and I think that anyone that says that is only watching the anime and not reading the manga. Her personalities are vastly different between the two.

Really, Really, Good!

I can't think of any line that might upset people. Some readers are just too sensitive and picky.

Thanks.

Wow what a great story! I loved the detail you put into this, you could feel the emotion and feelings coming off of every character. I like the epilogue too, I couldn't help but chuckle at the way that both Skuld and Urd acted at the ice cream shop. Great work and now I look forward to reading some of your other stories!

This was REALLY awesome story! I loved it! Great job!

I loved the story, BUT I also do not like how Belldandy is shown fulfilling contracts. She had 'satisfied' contracts of a sexual nature if the client requested it but denied Keiichi because it wasn't part of the contract. I feel that makes Belldandy no diiferent then an escort for hire, you only get what you pay for.

I'm going to get my criticism done and over with now: Yea, Belldandy and Keiichi are meant for eachother (I think we all have that concept by now). And call me old-fashioned, but the idea that Belldandy wasn't as...unexperienced as Keiichi irked me. Or just the fact that she is meant to be the essence of purity. I'm not sure but it didn't sit well.

And that's it! I can't think of ONE other thing that I didn't absolutely love about this story! I loved that this was all in one so my impatience wouldn't cause me to threaten you or anything *nervous laughter*. I am currently writing this at 4AM and am expected to wake up in 4 hours to work, however I don't feel like I'm screwed or wasted my time. No, this was time well spent _ You captured all of the characters and furthered my favorite anime couple's relationship without going OOC, which I thought was impossible. Maybe I'll be getting a chappy or two in of your sequel now? Hmmm...

In summary, this was a fanfic so well done that I favorited you and this story without even a thought (RARE). Ooooh the warm fuzzy this story gave meeeeee （＿）

YES YES YES! This was certainly a good story to read. I agree with the first reviewer, The fact that Belldandy is a "worldly" goddess made it a little OOC. In the anime, she was the prim and proper "perfect" girl, who does not know how to break a plate(season1) but, latter knew that she feels jealousy, like a normal girl would feel.(season2) In the manga, she was also the "prim and proper" but, she knew about "worldly" stuff, as to:

Ah my Goddess Chapter 43 - Belldandy's Tempestous Heart

Ah my Goddess Season 1 episode 19 - Ah! Don't Look at Me with Those Eyes?

These prove that bell-chan does know the fact of this, and we could speculate that Urd already told her about the buzz and the bees.

Nevertheless, No offence to the author, but Belldandy was really OOC when you decided that she also fulfills "Sexual Desires."

But to the whole of the story, TWO THUMBS UP! You have inspired me to continue my fanfic here also, although it may be not the serious type just like yours, mine has a touch of comedy on it.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

Keii-chan

Unlike the other reviewer I like the fact that you put the whole story on the table.

SPOILERS

I don’t feel happy if the writer deviates from their intentions due to peer pressure, in my mind the story should come from their own imagination, or combined with their co-writers. Changes in text and grammar are one thing; changes in the story’s foundation and ultimate conclusion mean that the author hasn’t fulfilled their dream.

Remembering that reviews are purely subjective, overall I found some passages to be overly wordy, and I almost fell into the trap mentioned by speed reading the character introductions, but having read your introduction I reread them properly. I enjoyed the story, but was able to guess the conclusion well before the end, during chapter eleven, but that’s no great feat as I’d imagine everyone who’s read it did the same. However it didn’t detract from the pleasure of reading to the end. I’ll defiantly reread it again when I need a little smile.

Congratulations

Tripod

Wow. All 15(?) chapters plus epilogue in one post. Not the way it's usually done, but what the hell, right?

Pros

- No waiting for updates! (Yeah, Davner, I'm looking at you!) :p

- No second-guessing or last-minute plot changes. The story is the story.

Cons

- 15 missed opportunities for specific feedback. 32,000 words is a lot to review in one bite.

- No points for partial success. If you lose my interest in Ch 6, you never know it. Posting chapter by chapter robs you of the feedback of where you may have 'lost' readers.

- Story fixed in stone on first post. No opportunity to 'flex' the plot based on feedback, or late-breaking inspiration.

I liked the story, overall. The whole 'mock trial' thing was very clever.

Your detailed description of the characters in the first chapters could be hit and miss. Those who are intimately familiar with canon already know this stuff, and might miss something important while skimming over it. With someone (like me six months ago) not 100% up on canon material, the descriptions help set up the characters without have to watch 24hrs of anime all over again.

The whole 'worldly' Belldandy thing didn't sit well with me. She'd fulfilled sexual contracts in the past? That's a little much, I think. Experienced field goddess? In the anime, she couldn't tell the difference between the physical reactions to nervousness/arousal and 'this thing called an illness'. (There's one of those nits you anticipated would be picked...)

I'm guessing that this is not the first creative writing you've done. The grammar/spelling/structure is too refined for a first-time attempt at fiction writing. The only thing I'd do differently (and I understand this is not a hard-and-fast rule) is render internal dialogue in italic, sans quotations. Bold, IMO, should be reserved for 'special' dialogue (voice of the Almighty, perhaps).

The first part was a little slow. (An hour-by-hour blow-by-blow of the Auto Club party reminded me a bit of Poe's use of descriptive narrative...twitch, twitch.) There can be such a thing as too much detail.

I liked how you expanded and matured K1 and Bell's relationship up to the trial, and gave us enough internal dialogue to build up a little drama.

Overall, an enjoyable read. I'll probably be back to read it again, when I'm sober. :P