Would love to see this updated :) really enjoy Cain and Abel, it's great to see Cain from an outsider's perspective instead of his internal monologue. And Abel is just awesome in her own right.

Thank you for this story. Please continue..

Simply brilliantly written, in all facets. I REALLY want more. Even if you don't ever update, I do hope you have a look through your reviews. Because you have crafted a wonderful story and I just wanted to let you know that.

Watz is best aide second to Jurgen

God Dammit! You reeeeealy left us on a cliffhanger like that? Reeeeealy?!
Why would you do such an evil, evil thing!?
(This fanfic is damn good too...)
In the Emperor's name I demand thee! Update!
Please?

On this entire fanfiction, Chapter 1 to 12... This is an excellently made story here... A good number of chapters... Every chapters immersive, engaging and fun... Got a few guffaws on them too... Why aren't you making more Mike Stormm?... You are doing a great job... PLEASE!... PRETTY PLEASE!... Make more... And complete this story... This is too good a piece of work to be left unfinished

Is this fic dead?

never stop making these, i luv em

Before I read, I need to know if this will ever be updated. Because I did enjoy the last one and I want more. But I won't read an unfinished tale.

Very good writing. May I enquire as to the other parent of Abel's daughter?

Where have you gone Mr. Storm? Why you leave us on a cliffhanger?

"...genetically-repressed primate..."

Yep, the culprit is definitely Eldar.

Btw, lol, the answer is forty-two. The tech-priests would brawl over the numerical meaning of life.

You know, the opening quote from "The Fortitude of Faith" got me thinking.

The Eldar would say that quote demonstrates the blindness of humanity. That we would believe our faith and Emperor would protect us from the galaxy and the warp's predations. So, it occured to me that the Aliens and (directly admitted by) Chaos simply cannot comprehend the fact that the faith and quotes (such as "The Emperor Protects) are not necessarily referring to tangible ideas.

"...no darkness shall touch me" and "...I walk in the Emperor's light" is apparently confused by xenos and daemons as saying: I cannot be corrupted/killed/fail because I have faith in the Emperor preventing that from happening to me personally and that everyone else believing that dying en-mass does nothing to deter me.

This is wrong. The above quotes are more along the lines of: If I fall/fail then what I accomplished before and/or through my death/defeat/corruption will make a difference via the "butterfly effect". Thus protecting me from the darkness of being useless/wasted. As I walk in the Emperor's light (of understanding this).

This is best explained in the quote "None That Died For Him Died in Vain."

First note, I rarely written reviews. It has been months since an update but I believe you earned this.

I have greatly enjoyed your works. I read most of them in a whole day. I spent late hours into the night reading your stories of this series.

I have truly understood your skill and preparations of your works.

Although I have to be pessimistic on completion of this after so long, I wish you the best of luck in your current goals.

The emperor protects.