Yo y no upd8?

Heck 5 WHOLE YEARS since the last review WHAT welp, I love this story and It's sad seeing great books like this never seeing the great conclusion they were destined to have. WELP You will probably never see this but people, or at least me, still can't wait to see the next chapter!

Cool story. Do you know if DarkRider007 posted the adopted version, if they plan to post it?

Update soon
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This is sooooo good! You haven't updated in ages, er, years! Please please please don't give up on it!

Perfection, no other word for it, you are the best writer ever besides maybe let Brambleclaw mate with a sweet light gray silver striped she cat with soft gray eyes whose name is Moon but becomes Moonlight

-Brightdawn/Sunshine12345

Best thing ever! Make the Next thing fast! please! I'll die If I don't know what happens!

Please continue this story IT IS EPIC!

~Redleaf

So is that like it? Because this story is awesome.

Really good. Would be nice if you updated

I just wanted to say you're doing a goodnjob with this story and I have the slightes question. Is Bumbleclaw's true inocents be brought to light any time in this story?

Other then that I think you're doing a particulary wonderful job on this story and wish for a quick update.

Belive what you shall,

The Ghost of Insanity.

I agree with you, Skyclans destiny didn't live up to the expectations I dreamed for it... but this story rocks! I'm glad that they Brambleclaw left Thunderclan and Squirrelflight.

Im happy you wrote more!

And I really like your version of the life in the lake. What will Crowfeather do? Will he still mate with Nightcloud? And will Ashfur still go nuts? Or Hollyleaf? And... okay, I stop it.

But I really want to see your Skyclan! Gon on soon, please!

I am liking this story, but can you update soon?

Well, this is a very interesting story. I don't read too many Brambleclw or Hawkfrost stories but it seems you have the characters down. I like the direction that you're going with and can't wait to see more. Though I will say that you need to watch some of your grammar use, it's not too bad but it is something to watch for.

Also, I totally agree with you on the whole daylight-warrior thing, isn't one of the rules of the warrior code that a warrior rejects the life of a kittypet. And if that's not bad enough, Leafstar ends up falling in love with one of the kitty-warriors (shivers).

Anyway, great job and can't wait to read the next chapter. Until next time, Sayonara!