It just hits me that this dude thought about the primordials even before uncle rick did. U the Oracle bro?

Just a quick spelling/grammar correction. ‘Their’ is ownership, like “that is THEIR house”. ‘they are’ should be “they’re” like “THEY’RE going swimming”. ‘there’ is a place, like “I will meet you THERE”

This is awesome ! Love reading this

I hate it cuz I liek porn

Pleaseeeeeeeeeeee don't be a percy annabeth break up make up story pleaseeeeeeeee have annabeth bashing

Honestly guys this is one of the first Chaos fanfiction so chill

So joining the hunters did not distract her from her duties or college? Dumb dumb start

love it!

I can't read this.
Its Percabeth.
Enough said.

you needed to put percy and calypso together lol

PS: yes I know this is an old fix (I’m the guest below). Keep writing tho it is a good story it’s just not my thing. ignore the fools below who probably haven’t even written a story of their own.

It was good in the beginning and the story is still good but I gotta stop reading. I’m interested in the overarching storyline but some stuff Just puts me off. Just a few small things here and there that I could get through but Artemis having a kid is just too much.

When out of nowhere is used allot.

THE SAXONS, WOW YA JUST HAD TA UNINTENTIONALLY INSULT A COUNTRY, THE UK IS MADE UP OF ANGLO-SAXONS.

the Renaissance happened in the sixteenth century, not in the fifteenth century 6 years after the fall of Constantinople