ok... 1st of all,
let's talk about chi dori.
idk why but somehow,that lil brat was even more creepier than orochimaru; she's like a mini version of orochimaru,minus.. the weird ass tongue.
and with the way u describe her,the only image that appears in my head was that goddamnit lil Sachiko twit from corpse party... and it had me uneasy while trying to sleepand 2nd is about the boss battle.
actually,this is the 2nd time i'm not satisfied by the final battle. the 1st boss battle was by some1 ofc. i mean... at 1st,i thought kurama will join the battle or something like... ghost vs demon(?) well.. nvm

and... btw, that addon1 chapter..it's sucks;
i thought the readers will FINALLY be able to read some full smutt. but all i got is just a make out season and then the twins interrupting them

and finally... the prequel of the sequel...
idk why the ghost was roaring,and on the other place,sasuke had a bad dream about naruto got tortured while clutching his shoulder at the same time when the 'ghost' is roaring
so... let me guess...

kurama...?

I'd finally found this story so right now it's the second time I'm reading it. I have to say reading the story again still gives me the creeps!

Oh my god, this story gives me legit creeps

Waaaaaaaaaahh! TT How could they just go and shut down the orphanage like that?

I love your style! It's so serious and dramatic with cliffhangers and awesome fight scenes (which are super hard to write)... and so funny I laugh out loud in the LIBRARY! AAAAAHHH! I love it. XD

Aaaah! Everyone needs help, now. What are they going to do? Naru to abd Kiva need to kick it into gear, dangit!

Oh gosh, this is so good... and freaky. I love sasunaru, and the orphanswer are so cute. I cried when you killed her though. Poor Sora and Kao... II can't wait for Naruto to show up and kick butt! Is Kyuubi in this? I hope he's a good guy this time. :)

Nice one.. I've neither read nor thought about this.. I bet you'd be a famous & successful writer.. ;)

“Kiba leaning close, his eyes staring at her chest while his fingers roamed between her breasts.” am I just a pervert or you purposefully make this line sounds so pervert

I know this was completed a long time ago but Jesus christ. This is really, really creepy. I'm a sucker for getting scared easily though but this is very scary. Good job!

So interesting and incredible story!

Wait, Naruto didn't fight and nobody fought Kabuto with his scalpel ?

How old is Sasuke in this?

Great story.

Nicely done! This story kept me scared and interested at the same time. I can't wait for sequel. I loved the new couples, Sasuke and naruto, Neji and gaara and i liked the way you made Kao and kamurou seem like lovers instead of brothers. I so love Twincest! Thank you you for the story.