Great story!

Good story. Really, well done.

Nicely done...thank you!

I could see Lucas avoiding going to the doctor, until he couldn't stand the pain any longer. Very nice story, thank you for sharing it with us!

Hey,

I really enjoyred reading this story, a great blend of advenutre, angst and conversation. Kristin kept things together really well tho...could've been a bit more emotional?

Did the idea of Lucas drowning come from the Abyss? thats the only other place i've seen that technique happen!

I realise that this story was written a long time ago, are you going to do anymore SQ or has the passion gone? i hope you do. well done.

Perfect mix of action and conversation! I really enjoyed it!

good story. it would have been cooler if u added seaquest pov at times, but all in all, very good story :)

An enjoyable read! The story progressed nicely; wasn’t over the top. Could imagine this short story as an actual episode; waiting for Ballard commentary at end. Very much appreciated the accurate character depictions; stayed true-to-show. Thank you for sharing!

cool story! i liked :)

Just great!loved it!

What a touching story. Good.

WOW. beautiful writing. Loved it and hope to see more from you.