You say meh, but this honestly amazed me. At first I was thinking, 'why is Malik being so douchey?' But in you apparant genius, you revealed how he was all insecure in his manly way. It was beautiful how you had Altair spark the intimacy, which I rarely see, in such a breathtakingly real way that just made sense. Thank you and please continue your talent.

Not great?! I think this is WONDERFUL!

Bittersweet and I absolutely love it :)

That was incredible! Thank you so much :D your very talented, and this fic was so bloody emocianal, loved the angry malik! And the "Is the way I treated you before any different than how an untrained novice treats a blade?" Was brilliant, somehow showed altair's actions to be so much more deeper/meaningful. The way you wrote this is truly amazing! Thankyou thankyou thankyou!xoxoxo

On the contrary, it was well written and flowed well. I'd consider it a great fanfic. :)

Yeah...I bet it WAS fun to write ;o)

You made Malik a beast in this one! But he does have feelings! Thank you again!

Well this was great. So loving. ;w;

Wow, I feel like I really wasn't expecting that. This is beautifully written. The complete contrast between the rough, animalistic language in the first half compared to the gentleness in the second. It's perfect.

One line reminds me of this Neutral Milk Hotel song I really like

"Catching signals that sound in the dark/We will take off our clothes/ And they'll be placing fingers through the notches in your spine"

I know that's a bit random, but the line always had this kind of...crazy romanticism to it. I think, certainly the way you use it, it's a beautiful image.

I absolutely love this! It's so beautifully written and your language use really conveys the story almost as though through images.

damn, son, that was so sad :( but I loved it. and the ending was frickin sweet.

It was fun to read!

With all the AC fics that I've read, I must say that this one is one of the better ones out there. The scenes are not only hot but they're... well, not how people would normally go about it.

I really enjoyed how the feelings were there, but Malik was dealing with his own issues to admit it.

Very much enjoyed~

I had read this fic time and time again. I think it's beautiful and it's probably my favorite assassin's creed fic (and I have read SO MANY). I love the detailed and sharp focus on emotions rather than sex and how you didn't glorify their union as something unrealistically ideal.

my favorite line is : "White did not dance before his eyes, Angels did not sing, but it felt so right, and left him lying boneless on the bed gasping for breath..."

magnificent

I couldn't take my eyes off the screen. I read one sentence and was hooked until the end. Great job.