Make a part 2!
Lemons on top of the tower!

oh ... my this . was . AWSOME a *jumps you vand hugs you*

Dear me *smiles* This is soooo hot!

What an end, man...However, I suspected that you would cut the scene before they get to the real stuff ;o)

I hope you write others like this. This was so well written. Loved the ending xD

I read this story three times and i'm shocked I havent reviewed at all!

This is adorable~

Would you write more? I absolutely love how you wrote about these two.

Or the nights that followed... lmao! love it!

I really find this adorable, well, 'cept the sexiness, that's not quite adorable, per se, but it's fluffy. And in character.

I love Malik's annoyance with Altair and Altair's confusion about why Malik's annoyed with him. The whole thing works really well.

- Kirrae

You can almost feel the devotion, bleeding off the screen!

... These characters are very well defined, as is there relationship. And I have to say: I love how you did this. I desperately wish you'd continue this, or even just reuse these characters. Seriously.

I kept making these weird noises of joy at the end. Truly an awesome piece of writing.

Aw, so CUTE! I will tell no one of how much this couple makes me happy

I have read this story like three times already. I can't believe I have missed reviewing it!

Well paced.

Good keeping in character.

and i adore Malik in control...

i like this one! vary good, wish tat you would finish it /

Oh, I love this! The misunderstanding between Altair and Malik, and how they both assume the other knows what they're thinking just seems to be something they'd have a lot of problems with. And the ending is just pure hotness!