RanmaTime for punishment
meIt's punishment time!
*danganronpa excecution song plays*

Punishment Due is fantastic. I'd love to see an update.

Akane truly is a bitch...such a sadist...not in attractive way...just simply a bitch! She should get raped by fifty domestic animals filling her inner sanctum and violating her beyond redemption :)

I find myself cackling with sadistic amusment as Ranma and the Punisher despence justice in their own way. Though when is Ranma going to become known as the Punishers Apprentice or something?

Please more?

You've got a rather good start on a concept, and I've enjoyed the read. But nothing since November is tough.

Anyway, I like how you portray the characters and their motivations.

Thank You,

S.

Demon God of Chaos,

Thank you for the story "Punishment Due". I am enjoying the read, and I do know how difficult it is to write without a Beta/proof-reader.

Cheers,

Scott

I love what you did here and a great description of what transpired during the chapter.

Please update soon!

I thought the parts that showed the world from the police officers point of view was interesting as most of the time it is from either the main characters or the leaders and rarely those on the front-lines who have to deal with vampires, super-weapons, alien invasions, etc.

It is nice to see that Ranma is using his ki abilities in a fight. Though as I noted in an earlier review, while ki users and traditions tend to be insular and keep to themselves, they span the power levels too. With some being practically cosmic in nature in their own way.

I wonder if the change in ki is due to something from his past that is maturing or whether it is due to some outside element from the marvel superhero world (like some of those Living Weapons from Iron Fist).

Oooh, a nice bloodbath here, but I think that Ranma should be more professional and not play with his opponents.

i think im a bit more surprised that there wasnt any violence in this chapter. i guess im just used to seeing ranma try to apply his martial arts to everything.

you do good work

D

Interesting continuation.

Please update soon!

Highly enjoyable. Too bad you're not getting more reviews. Probably because of the OOCnes.

THe only thing that seems really strange is how easily the school accepts the curse or even believes Ranma without a demonstration.

well, i hope you continue this story, i've seen good stories unfinished, and i got an idea... why don't ranma uses a 'clark kent effect'? i mean, use a ponytail and glasses, to unbound his hair and take off the glasses...

It definitely has the potential to turn into a great story, so I will wait and see...Though, I have a couple of questions. How far along in his training is Ranma? Is this after Saffron? Because so far I have seen the story flip-flop between Ranma showing incredible weakness to being able to manipulate and generate his ki. If it's just before the chestnut fist, then he should only have rudimentary ki abilities. However, if it is post Saffron, it shouldn't be a surprise to see Ranma dodge or catch bullets, especially considering he has techniques like the yama and umi senken's, the hiryu shotenha and the mouko takabisha, as well as the techniques he may have copied or learned from his rivals like ryouga and mousse. He would also most likely be looking to step his chi and martial arts game up even further, rather than utilizing things like guns or wearing kevlar. Ranma's attack style is based in his skill, adaptability and sheer power of his chi. On that note, have you read any of the newest Immortal Dragon Fist books? Dude, the new story arc is totally awesome and he is definitely a martial artist who would pique Ranma's curiousity, especially after DragonFist reads the book of history and techniques of the Immortal DragonFist. Filled with much badassery! Well, hope you continue this story and consider my words, I mean you can't get much more fantastical than Marvel and the Punisher picking up a new ally, especially as skilled and powerful as Ranma, would definitely blip on the radars of quite a few superheroes and supervillians, not just the syndicates!

Any interesting story. it's a little hard to read at times because you switch views between paragraphs without any type of transition. It takes a few sentences to figure out which point of view we're reading.

In terms of the storyline itself, it's interesting to see this side of Ranma. A vast departure from what we consider traditional, but then again, that's the point of Fan Fiction. A darker Ranma makes for a darker story indeed.

I hope you plan on keeping some of the other members of the original Ranma cast involved in the story, even though you've taken Ranma over to the States. Maybe some of the people who have shown actual interest in Ranma, like Kasumi or Hinako.

How far are you planning on taking this story?